Frostbite

some people are
  as cruel as a cold
 winter day

 — senryu



Berteena
Wild Orchid Haiku

13 February, 2019
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Marcum Wong Avatar
February 17, 2019 at 3:49 PM
Perfect metaphor Berteena! : )
Harmony Of The Soul Avatar
February 25, 2019 at 7:44 PM
Thank you, Ms. Connie! ;)
Dietrich Avatar
February 15, 2019 at 8:06 PM
OH so true! I really like this.
Harmony Of The Soul Avatar
February 25, 2019 at 7:43 PM
Thanks so much! ;)
Michael Avatar
February 14, 2019 at 5:22 AM
Or like a mountain of ICE...Well expressed...Happy Valentine to you and yours...All the best...
Harmony Of The Soul Avatar
February 14, 2019 at 10:37 PM
Very true! Thank you! Blessings!
Gondolf Avatar
February 14, 2019 at 4:19 AM
Sometimes people say cruel things and don’t even realize it.
Harmony Of The Soul Avatar
February 14, 2019 at 10:36 PM
The record repeats too often to be accidental in this particular case. Nevertheless, makes easy material to choose from when I write. ;)
Krutsinger Avatar
February 13, 2019 at 11:11 PM
some people are ignored by me in ridiculous quantities I am smiling now....satisfied. smugly. You are inspiring me...and it is too LATE to be inspired. I need my sleep!
Harmony Of The Soul Avatar
February 14, 2019 at 10:34 PM
So cool! Thanks, Ms. Caren! As you can see, I don’t sleep much either. I pray you rest well.
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