Frostbite

some people are as cruel as a cold winter day — senryu Berteena Wild Orchid Haiku 13 February, 2019

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Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 2/17/2019 3:49:00 PM

Perfect metaphor Berteena! : )

Berteena Harmony Of The Soul
Date: 2/25/2019 7:44:00 PM

Thank you, Ms. Connie! ;)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/15/2019 8:06:00 PM

OH so true! I really like this.

Berteena Harmony Of The Soul
Date: 2/25/2019 7:43:00 PM

Thanks so much! ;)

Arturo Michael

Date: 2/14/2019 5:22:00 AM

Or like a mountain of ICE...Well expressed...Happy Valentine to you and yours...All the best...

Berteena Harmony Of The Soul
Date: 2/14/2019 10:37:00 PM

Very true! Thank you! Blessings!

John Gondolf

Date: 2/14/2019 4:19:00 AM

Sometimes people say cruel things and don’t even realize it.

Berteena Harmony Of The Soul
Date: 2/14/2019 10:36:00 PM

The record repeats too often to be accidental in this particular case. Nevertheless, makes easy material to choose from when I write. ;)

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 2/13/2019 11:11:00 PM

some people are ignored by me in ridiculous quantities I am smiling now....satisfied. smugly. You are inspiring me...and it is too LATE to be inspired. I need my sleep!

Berteena Harmony Of The Soul
Date: 2/14/2019 10:34:00 PM

So cool! Thanks, Ms. Caren! As you can see, I don’t sleep much either. I pray you rest well.