Frost Spider Webs

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December's wintry breath clouding the pond, frosting panes, and obscuring summer's warm memory

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Paige Hind

Date: 12/8/2023 3:22:00 PM

Isn't that the truth? :) Loveliness...!

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 12/8/2023 4:09:00 PM

thanks for your visit and comments, dear Paige. have a splendid evening, Sara

Silent One

Date: 12/6/2023 11:53:00 AM

Wonderful imagery Sara.. I have a black car and it seems to attract spiders who build their cobwebs on the side mirrors... so recently i have come to my care and seen frozen cobwebs.. which look really cool.. another great Kimo..

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 12/6/2023 5:08:00 PM

thanks for your visit, Silent One, and for your complimentary words. Fascinating that you now have frozen cobwebs on your car...I'm sure they do look cool. We sometimes get them in our flower beds now that the flowers are gone. They're intricate and beautiful. Have a great evening, Sara

Ink Empress

Date: 12/6/2023 3:45:00 AM

Wow how do you even come up with such ways to describe nature? So beautiful how you personify and deliver such creative lines in various forms. In few words you’ve left me in awe mesmerized! I especially love “ wintry breath clouding the pond,“ creative! “ summer's warm memory“ ah the melancholy when one reminisces. I feel you. Sending you sun from here always. Pleasure reading this

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 12/6/2023 4:49:00 AM

awww, thank you dear Ink for your enthusiastic and encouraging words. Can't tell you exactly how I come up with the lines I write...Bill calls it my sometimes 'crazy' imagination. :-) Yes, there's a certain amount of melancholy that comes with remembering the warm, languid days of summer. Sending you some Texas warmth 60 degrees today. Hugs, Sara

Beryl Edmonds

Date: 12/5/2023 6:26:00 PM

A lovely Kimo Sara, although it’s cold when wintry breath blows, the stunning sights are a pleasure to behold… Belle

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 12/6/2023 4:47:00 AM

thanks for stopping by, Belle. I dislike cold so I struggle in the winter...so I look for the beauty hoping to distract myself :-) smiles...have a pleasant day, Sara

Suzanne Delaney

Date: 12/5/2023 6:07:00 PM

Amazing and intricate frost lines, Sara Your words capture all the frostiness of winter’s breath. Enjoyed this one. SuZ

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 12/6/2023 4:46:00 AM

thanks for stopping by SuZ and for your meaningful comments. Glad you enjoyed the poem...have a splendid day, Sara