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Frost Advisory

FROST ADVISORY “frost advisory” dramatic voice and music wakes a morbid chill

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Joe Maverick

Date: 1/6/2014 6:51:00 PM

Almost wish i had heard that advisory on reading this one, dear Daver.. Still; second thoughts, it can wait another year..!,

Date: 10/30/2010 7:36:00 AM

Good use of imagery for a creative view. Thank you for sharing your thoughts with us. Have a good weekend. Karen

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 10/16/2010 6:10:00 PM

like the end line, a chill lol, enjoyed this one Daver A.,..P.D.

Nate D.

Date: 10/15/2010 11:16:00 AM

yes what a dramatic way one can say. enjoyed' n.d

James Peranteau

Date: 10/15/2010 9:16:00 AM

Perfect poem Daver ! Right (write) on time as well, for, here it comes ! james

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 10/15/2010 7:14:00 AM

Starting my weekend early reading all the amazing poetry of all the wonderful poets here at PoetrySoup. I am so happy to find your poetry posted here this morning Daver. Have a wonderful weekend and I hope you find tons of inspiration along the way as Fall is upon us. Love, Carol

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/14/2010 8:23:00 PM

Very interesting one . This is tanka, Daver? ARe you sure not senryu? I quite like it Give us more!! Luv, Andrea

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 10/14/2010 3:41:00 PM

Very enjoyable Tanks with nice images, daver

Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/14/2010 2:53:00 PM

This is really interesting ..Got me wondering about this voice and music...Sara

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 10/14/2010 11:01:00 AM

Yes, the Weather Channel has become quite dramatic! I love seeing their reporters getting pelted by hail or having tree limbs crashing around them as hurricanes make landfall. At present, it's a haiku. Are you going to add more lines to make it a tanka? If so, let me know and I'll visit again. Great poem! Love, Carolyn

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 10/14/2010 9:55:00 AM

Super cool piece Daver and good luck in Amy' s contest with this one luv..if u enter it... much to think on in your great lines .. especially dramatic voice and music luv..