Frost

frost blankets my lawn at the break of autumn's dawn . . . sunbeams stream through trees Dec. 29, 2022 Used now for the 'BRIAN STRAND CONTEST NO 1167' Poetry Contest

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Eve Roper

Date: 1/5/2023 5:02:00 PM

Andrea, congratulations on your win in Tania's contest. A great verse with ice cold imagery. Many blessings to you

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 1/5/2023 10:14:00 AM

Back with "Congratulations" on your pretty "frost" win. Have a blessed day writing away...............

Tania Kitchin

Date: 1/5/2023 3:36:00 AM

Andrea, a beautiful haiku, congratulations on your winning placement!

Joanna Daniel

Date: 1/1/2023 2:00:00 AM

Lovely, Andrea, wishing you and yours a Happy, Healthy and Prosperous New Year:)

Paghunda Zahid

Date: 12/29/2022 9:00:00 PM

Great.. Good luck.. May the New Year bless you with health, wealth, and happiness Susan

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 12/29/2022 2:05:00 PM

Frost on the grass is so pretty like this write. Good Luck. Blessings............

Sotto Poet

Date: 12/29/2022 1:19:00 PM

Great haiku, Andrea. You conveyed such a wonderful winter scene. Good luck with the contest.

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 12/29/2022 10:25:00 AM

Hello Andrea, Is it Autumn there? It is winter here. Hugs.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 12/29/2022 11:49:00 AM

Hello Andrea, I thought you were in a different season. Do you have a lot of snow? It is like Spring here a Mother nature's tease. Happy New Year. Hugs.

Andrea Dietrich
Date: 12/29/2022 11:19:00 AM

It is winter. I just equate frost with the arrival of fall