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Frost Premiere Contest Winner

Frost It creeps up on us like a silent web, that silver carpet that covers the morning like a silken sheath. How still the street is as the sun shines on the steaming roof tops, making the gardens appear like a hot bath, in the cold air. The leaves lie, curled and crumpled like discarded tissues on the pavement, waiting for the wind to blow them to the sky. Every thing is different this morning, magical, cobwebs, lacey and outlined in the hedge, windows decorated by the frosts icy designers art. Surreal and beautiful, raw and fragile, gone too soon in the heat of the sun.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 9/25/2018 5:42:00 PM
Congrats on your gold medal win, Jane. Well done.
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Jane Gomm
Date: 10/1/2018 9:51:00 AM
Thankyou for your reply. Jane.
Date: 9/24/2018 8:51:00 AM
You have displayed frost in a wondrous and fantastical way. Silent silver web... such a perfect metaphor. Congrats on your 1st place finish!
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Jane Gomm
Date: 9/24/2018 3:18:00 PM
Oh, Thankyou so much. I am thrilled to bits. Just wrote the poem this morning after seeing the first frost of the season. Jane.
Date: 9/24/2018 7:31:00 AM
You have described frost in such a lovely way - a silent web, magical, cobwebs, lacey. This is beautifully done, Jane.
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Jane Gomm
Date: 9/24/2018 3:19:00 PM
Thankyou Caren, am very pleased to have done so well. Jane.
Date: 9/24/2018 7:27:00 AM
What a beautiful presentation of this aspect of nature, Jane. Too few stop to pause at the free works of art displays and a frosted spider's web is certainly a wonder to behold! Congratulations on your win. Wendy
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Jane Gomm
Date: 9/24/2018 3:20:00 PM
Thankyou Wendy for your words of praise. Jane.
Date: 9/24/2018 6:51:00 AM
Congrats!!! on your lovely win jane...very 'cool' of you...love & light...^WW^
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Jane Gomm
Date: 9/24/2018 3:22:00 PM
Dear "WW" I am delighted that I managed to express what I saw in words. Jane.

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