Premiere Contest WinnerFrost

Frost


It creeps up on us like a silent web, that silver carpet that covers the morning
like a silken sheath. How still the street is as the sun shines on the
steaming roof tops, making the gardens appear like a hot bath, in the cold air.


The leaves lie, curled and crumpled like discarded tissues on the pavement, waiting for the wind to blow them to the sky.

 Every thing is different this morning, magical, cobwebs, lacey and outlined in the hedge, windows decorated by the frosts icy designers art. Surreal and beautiful, raw and fragile, gone too soon in the heat of the sun.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Gauthier Avatar
September 25, 2018 at 5:42 PM
Congrats on your gold medal win, Jane. Well done.
Gomm Avatar
October 1, 2018 at 9:51 AM
Thankyou for your reply. Jane.
Rowe Avatar
September 24, 2018 at 8:51 AM
You have displayed frost in a wondrous and fantastical way. Silent silver web... such a perfect metaphor. Congrats on your 1st place finish!
Gomm Avatar
September 24, 2018 at 3:18 PM
Oh, Thankyou so much. I am thrilled to bits. Just wrote the poem this morning after seeing the first frost of the season. Jane.
Krutsinger Avatar
September 24, 2018 at 7:31 AM
You have described frost in such a lovely way - a silent web, magical, cobwebs, lacey. This is beautifully done, Jane.
Gomm Avatar
September 24, 2018 at 3:19 PM
Thankyou Caren, am very pleased to have done so well. Jane.
Watson Avatar
September 24, 2018 at 7:27 AM
What a beautiful presentation of this aspect of nature, Jane. Too few stop to pause at the free works of art displays and a frosted spider's web is certainly a wonder to behold! Congratulations on your win. Wendy
Gomm Avatar
September 24, 2018 at 3:20 PM
Thankyou Wendy for your words of praise. Jane.
Warrior Avatar
September 24, 2018 at 6:51 AM
Congrats!!! on your lovely win jane...very 'cool' of you...love & light...^WW^
Gomm Avatar
September 24, 2018 at 3:22 PM
Dear "WW" I am delighted that I managed to express what I saw in words. Jane.
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