From Your Heart's Caverns

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from the heart's caverns fly out the malicious bats your poisoned winged words Eileen

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Diane Christian

Date: 6/14/2015 7:29:00 AM

Thanks for kind feedback and support, Writing poetry is great, but to sing it is just a new dimension, God has given me courage to just go for it so I did, I'm easy to find too as got my photo on you tube, Diane christian i'll sing to my king, And it should have options to view my other songs, All my singing made it rain haha

Paul Callus

Date: 6/14/2015 6:16:00 AM

The worst things is that they usually come out at night, when we are prone to be more sensitive and emotional! You need a magic shield to ward off those poisoned barbs! Hugs // paul

Eileen Manassian
Date: 6/14/2015 6:59:00 AM

Have you got one handy, Paul? I sure could use it, dear. Hope all is well. Apasssionata!

David Meade

Date: 6/13/2015 10:01:00 PM

My your heart be filled with light and love LO . . . Such is the essence of your beauty!

Eileen Manassian
Date: 6/14/2015 5:04:00 AM

You see beauty, David. Others.....well, let's just say I'm glad you see beauty. Hugs

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 6/13/2015 8:07:00 AM

Quite the picture you have painted here. I believe your heart is too powerful to be poisoned.

Eileen Manassian
Date: 6/14/2015 5:06:00 AM

My heart is a big marshmallow....It gets squeezed and bent out of shape....often. Poisoned too....Such is life. Thanks for the visit, Richard.

Casarah Nance

Date: 6/12/2015 10:03:00 PM

wow, strong and powerful! I love it!

Eileen Manassian
Date: 6/14/2015 5:07:00 AM

Thanks, Sweetie. I so appreciate the visit. Hugs

Diane Christian

Date: 6/12/2015 12:29:00 PM

Ohhhh powerful message We must guard our toung Think before we speak

Eileen Manassian
Date: 6/12/2015 3:12:00 PM

Thanks, Diane. It would be great if everyone would be able to do that. I struggle with it myself. While there is life, there is hope.