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From Your Fiancé

I found your letters yesterday— Eighteen years ago. You wisely wrote from Paris in francais Without the pride, without the show. I’m glad to note, I feel no more, Reading you anew Except to marvel how your closing door Was shut so softly. Subtle you. The tactfulness in every line Missed me way back then. Your dignity indelibly divine… Thanks come slow from certain men.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 4/1/2010 7:53:00 PM
I enjoyed the fine rhyming in the poem and a way to convey message. Congrats
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Date: 4/1/2010 6:20:00 PM
Awesome verse of rhymes Steve. A message that is all too true, so many times. Thank you so much for your most worthy entry, in my contest. Agape, Moses
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Date: 4/1/2010 2:52:00 PM
Congrats Steve on your winning poem in Moses contest.. a wonderful write and win for u to so enjoy on your trip to the winners circle..luv.. "Sweetheart"
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Date: 6/1/2009 8:02:00 PM
Nice tackful verse, well written, clever, a joy to read. Thanks for sharring. Judy Riley
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