From Up There

I saw a boy with hands closed in prayer Beside him his mother cried in despair Can I assist asked I She looked up to the sky “Ask glue remover to drop from up there.” *+* And glue remover from the heavens did fall Hallelujahs rang out from one and from all But the boy looked about "I'm just being devout My hands weren't glued together at all". Add on written by: Robert Gorelick

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Date: 7/4/2023 4:57:00 PM
lol this is very cute to read
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 7/4/2023 5:27:00 PM
Thank you Rose. Belle :)
Date: 7/4/2023 2:30:00 PM
And glue remover from the heavens did fall__ Hallelujahs rang out from one and from all__But the boy looked about__ "I'm just being devout__My hands weren't glued together at all" __Cheers Robert
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Robert Gorelick
Date: 7/6/2023 6:24:00 PM
Thank you, Belle. Our collaborative success is surely a sterling example, delightful limerick fun for all.
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 7/4/2023 2:35:00 PM
Fabulous Robert, have to use this as an add on, it’s too good not to. Thank you, Belle
Date: 7/4/2023 11:00:00 AM
So funny, Belle. I fear you may have just described my childhood: the only way I would have slowed down long enough to fold my hands in prayer is if I had accidentally glued them together. His poor mother - what a praydicament! Hugs ~ John
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 7/4/2023 2:45:00 PM
Thank you very much John, boys will be boys after all’s said and done, you have to feel empathy for mom. Belle
Date: 7/4/2023 6:55:00 AM
What a twist at the end. Lovely and delightful limerick. Hugs.
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 7/4/2023 2:48:00 PM
Thank you so much Victor, pleased you enjoyed the read. Belle
Date: 7/4/2023 4:55:00 AM
Thats very funny Belle hehe!! Debx
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 7/4/2023 2:49:00 PM
Glad you found this Limerick funny Deb. All the best, Belle
Date: 7/4/2023 4:05:00 AM
lol Belle. What mischief did that little rascal get himself into?
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 7/4/2023 2:52:00 PM
He did, naughty boy. Thank you Lin, glad you saw humour the lim. Belle
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