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From the Tower

(A New Zealand Poem) In thought as I sit here, 747 flying by, in contrast to the isles of white clouds cruising eastwards across the Manukau sky yet another 747 passes by. Tourists keep on coming, knowing nothing of the struggle within, local tribe just trying to stop those damned metal tanks from being dug in. new motorway forms wiri losing shades of green falcon stress in flight L P G plant being created far away (of course) from politician and speculators dreams. To appease the youth ‘Diesel’ are playing, ‘Watts in a tank’ featured, defies the misery, civilization; are like that, the source of the purpose soon forgotten. yesterday’s showers glittered like diamond dew drops beginning to fade Today they enter the world of different race, one’s sentiment for the environment is taken, deep within the abyss of total despair, darkness descending upon the alleys of a lifetime tradition centuries old, with minds searching vigorously for reasons while veils of happiness entombed within a memory. land taken forthwith the world now needs to move on… brand new limousines © Harry J Horsman 2023

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Date: 3/24/2023 8:01:00 AM
There are no sanctuaries left anywhere, Harry: Just the insidious creep of materialism gone mad. I keep the sacredness of Nature within me too and pray for the insanity to end. Wonderful Haibun, Fond wishes, SuZ
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Date: 2/24/2023 4:34:00 AM
Sir Harry, this is marvellously important, prescient, good for Mama Earth too. Prayed thanks/ My weird thought: GOD U HEALED HARRY H. BECAUSE this poem & more needs to see the light! Thanknu kind Sir, mybFAVE MENSCH. shalom shalom (Anil Deo)
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Date: 2/19/2023 2:08:00 PM
my dear poet; thank Jehovah God Almighty, in Jesus Christ's Name that women were created! I'm oblivious to(save my God and His Son) everything but sir! lol...yep i iz ;) your glistering "dew drops" excited me in this here write uv yours...ty...have a wonderful winter my friend...much love, james
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Date: 2/18/2023 5:55:00 PM
Harry your thoughts are well felt by those that can relate. It is sad that so many lack the vision you express so well here my friend. Hope you are doing well and it is always nice to see you post my friend...
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Date: 2/13/2023 8:57:00 PM
When 747 flies high in the sky and as limousines speed past the highways, in between there is a life tormented and pained and 'darkness is descending the alleys of a lifetime tradition' ! Great observations of modern life and valuable insights. Beautiful penning dear harry !
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Date: 2/12/2023 2:21:00 PM
Very thought-provoking write that is so true. Well done.
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Date: 2/12/2023 7:10:00 AM
Well written Haibun, Harry. You've got a good veiw from where you're sitting, but what you see is troubling. The whole world is heading deep into chaos and there seems to be more sheep than great leaders. Thanks for sharing, Bill
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Date: 2/11/2023 3:47:00 AM
I am not familiar with the new happenings in New Zealand, but your lines paint a good picture of the situation there. On an island there is not very much room for both people, animals, the natural environment plus what modern man so desires. I do like the middle Haiku. Thanks for sharing this one and for visiting my page. Sara
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Date: 2/9/2023 6:13:00 AM
The bad news is that it appears to have spread worldwide, Harry. This is a biting satire on men in the current world, and pity for the nitpickers.
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Date: 2/9/2023 6:05:00 AM
This line spells the essence of your poem for me, Harry: darkness descending upon the alleys of a lifetime tradition centuries old... your view from the tower enlightens the sad story behind progress.
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Date: 2/9/2023 4:22:00 AM
Sadly it seems to be everywhere, my friend, evil one runs this world, sadly so many falling victim to it's blindness and deception, May God bless, comfort, guide and fill you with His peace, love, spirit and joy in abundance
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Date: 2/9/2023 3:23:00 AM
Well Harry its way out of sync..Is my think.? Yet there seems no layered thoughts on How to live better sustainably.' For instance I watched a guy smooth of a lower edge on A flat roofs timber edge..The whole length to Do was 1i ft? He used a battrey sander..' why Not do it by hand.? He gets muscle tone no Need to lug much equipment.' OK on bigger Works the machine is better ' yet on this scale.?
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Date: 2/9/2023 1:32:00 AM
A sharp satire on modern men and woe betide those who complain.
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