From the First Time That I Saw You

Was it yesterday , when I lost track of time Was it last night when I saw you that these lips yearned once again for wafting spice from heated wine . Was it last night when you got too close Was it that your smile ? Somehow it shone brighter warmer , even lighter - in my lonely night . Yesterday, I saw you , as I closed my eyes I saw you with my whole heart and not with rambling thoughts , cobwebbing my mind. Awestrucked by your passion play never thought you'd make me feel this way Was this love at first sight. ? I swear I heard a whisper, a hush - hushed gentle whisper I felt it blowing softly , deep inside . Is this imagination , tender infatuation Is this a virgin instinct I can't hide. Was it yesterday , when I lost track of time No , yesterday is gone , the chapter should be thorn I'll continue sailing , steering the wheel , alone.
Pure Fiction : ) Inspired by Shadow Hamilton 's contest ( not for the contest )

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 5/11/2016 3:57:00 PM
I enjoyed reading several of your pieces today. Thank you for sharing with us. Hope life is treating you well...TAH
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Date: 12/7/2015 11:11:00 AM
I love '...I saw you with my whole heart' and 'cobwebbing my mind!' Delightfully tender yet passionate. Beautifully written! BRAVO!! Best wishes, Keith
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Date: 12/4/2015 3:55:00 AM
beautiful. cobwebbing my mind". i have used lot of cob webbing before. keep it up
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Date: 12/1/2015 9:14:00 AM
awesome
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Date: 11/30/2015 10:24:00 PM
This is a wonderful love poem, tinged with sadness. Thanks for sharing.
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Date: 11/30/2015 1:47:00 PM
so very beautifully painted as always charmaine excellent pen dear pal wishing you a blessed week
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Date: 11/26/2015 5:44:00 PM
Your thoughts come alive and breathe within your words. I am captured by the images so skillfully developed by the author and the passion of the words move me. Emile.
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Date: 11/26/2015 2:59:00 PM
Charmaine you are so very inspiring, Once again your words flow effortlessly and beautifully down the page!!! Best Wishes Kevin
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Date: 11/26/2015 12:58:00 PM
- A beautiful moment ..... (with eyes that attracted your attention) - Enjoy reading Charmaine, thanks - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 11/26/2015 11:33:00 AM
The ending is so sad... to sail without that one who made you lose track of time...so lovely written though
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