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From Raipur to Raigarh The trees far away hold my attention fast, As the train moves past, as the train moves past, Looking at them, I feel serene, The dense blue fog covering the green, Such houses of various sizes go by, As the train does fly, as the train does fly, Looking at them, I feel joyous, Seems they're sharing this journey with us. ~~~~~~ 12/27/18 ~~~~~~ For Constance La France's "'J' contest - new or old" contest

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Date: 9/15/2021 6:14:00 AM
Jo, excellent and congratulations on your win in my "I" contest with this beautiful poem, well done ~ love and serenity _Constance
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Date: 9/13/2021 5:02:00 AM
Lovely write Jo, Congrats on your win
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Date: 9/13/2021 3:34:00 AM
Trees, trains, houses, colors, sizes…a lovely journey with impactful repetition! Congratulations, Jo!
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Date: 1/1/2019 7:17:00 AM
Sounds like a lovely and serene voyage, Jo...you and the train, one with nature! Best regards // paul
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Date: 12/27/2018 1:54:00 PM
nice to hear from you, jo...a glorious read--picturesque!...huggs
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Date: 12/27/2018 11:42:00 AM
I loved this little poem Jo. It was fun to read and it flowed so well.
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Date: 12/27/2018 9:49:00 AM
Great Indian journey...
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Date: 12/27/2018 9:42:00 AM
Lovely flow and imagery, Jo..I felt the scenery go by..on this rhythmic ride.
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