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From Our Perch In the Gnarly Gumdrop Tree

Greeting the day's offerings, we cat souls Were watching for scampering voles and moles. Five vigilant cousins and I, perched up high, watching the sun rise in the eastern sky. From our perch in the gnarly gumdrop tree, We surveyed the meadow, calm as we could be. The grays and tans of a gentle morn, Brought forth tasty mice, who were soon forlorn. September day, offers so much lively meat on the ground. We sneaked up stealthily, me and my brigade, profound. We pounced, and the critters were goners for sure. Their meat tasty, and fresh, and decidedly pure. Our daily hunt, is so much fun, in this tree. My cousins, my brother, my dad, and me. We all do this, every single morn. Making the little creatures feel forlorn.

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Date: 1/15/2019 12:56:00 PM
You definitely put yourself in the cat's paws, as it were, also love the line 'we sneak up stealthily, me and my brigade' - somehow both cute and deadly!
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 1/15/2019 4:17:00 PM
I watch my cat, and I know he wants a posse', but then again, would he be angry if his brigade got to his prey first? I do believe he would.
Date: 1/15/2019 12:45:00 PM
Around here we have mice and shrews; good thing that my cat hates fresh meat...hers must be seasoned and well done or she turns up her nose. I don't think she'd enjoy the hunt.
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M. L. Kiser
Date: 1/16/2019 1:54:00 PM
That's Sweet Pea. She was a Manx; passed in 2015; she and I had congestive heart failure the same year only she didn't survive it. If you've never had a Manx; I highly recommend one. Half dog, half cat with boo-coos of charm and they know it.
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 1/15/2019 12:55:00 PM
I have a different cat. My daughter had a calico named Peppers for 18.5 years, who looked almost exactly like your cat's photo.

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