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From My Diary: Sadness


Dear diary, I write these words, so sad and true,
     and etch my heartfelt thoughts forever in this book.
Now, with a broken heart, I share my pain with you.

My childhood home, in wooded setting near a brook,
     I now will have to leave with permanent goodbye,
and etch my heartfelt thoughts forever in this book.

For many years it stood, pure white, three stories high...
    our home on a grassed hill, old-world design and proud 
 I now will have to leave with permanent goodbye.

My childhood home now stands below a stormy cloud;
     is doomed to action that brings us lament and pain...
our home on a grassed hill, old-world design and proud.
 
For, New York State has now ruled eminent domain;
     a bridge between two towns is planned, all set to build.
 is doomed to action that brings us lament and pain...

So, on this page, my bitter, weeping tears are spilled:
     Dear diary, I write these words so sad and true;
a bridge between two towns is planned, all set to build.
     Now, with a broken heart, I share my pain with you.


Sandra M. Haight

~1st Place~
Contest: A Poem Called, From My Diary
Sponsor: Broken Wings
Judged: 11/07/2017

True Story ~ 1960
Written in Iambic Hexameter (12 syllables, 6 feet)
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Marcum Wong Avatar
November 8, 2017 at 1:57 PM
Your pain of loss is brilliantly displayed in your heartfelt poem Sandra. I remember this factual story. Congratulations on meriting a First Place win my friend! An excellent example of the form as well! : )
Haight Avatar
November 11, 2017 at 8:07 AM
Thank you very much, Connie, for your supportive comments and congratulations! Much appreciated. Hugs, Sandra
La France Avatar
November 8, 2017 at 10:21 AM
Sandra, congratulations on your win in my contest with this sad diary entry. I was moved by the pain in your words, I know this pain as I once watched my beloved family home burn to the ground.
Haight Avatar
November 11, 2017 at 8:06 AM
Yes, I remember reading one of your poems about the fire, Constance...so sad. Thank you for my placement and your supportive comments. Hugs, Sandra
Pigeon Tart Avatar
November 8, 2017 at 9:25 AM
Congratulations on your win with this excellently crafted touching pen :) A lovely day to you! xomo
Haight Avatar
November 11, 2017 at 8:04 AM
Thank you very much, Maureen! Hugs, Sandra
Lamoureux Avatar
November 8, 2017 at 7:42 AM
Great story telling! Congrats on your win.
Haight Avatar
November 11, 2017 at 8:04 AM
Thanks so much, Richard. Sandra
Wigley Avatar
November 8, 2017 at 12:47 AM
How tragic losing such a treasure, Sandra. congrats on your win, a lovely piece. Viv x
Haight Avatar
November 11, 2017 at 8:04 AM
Yes, it was sad, Viv. Thank you for your nice comment and congrats. Sandra
Roper Avatar
November 7, 2017 at 11:34 PM
Back to congratulate you on your win.. Hugs Eve ~`*
Haight Avatar
November 11, 2017 at 8:03 AM
Thank you so much, Eve! Hugs, Sandra
Roper Avatar
October 31, 2017 at 6:28 PM
Wonderfully written sad Terzanelle, Sandra , luck in the contest. Boo… ~v~ Happy Halloween :) Hugs Eve ~`*
Haight Avatar
November 3, 2017 at 4:12 PM
Thank you, Eve, for the nice comment. Hope you had a Happy Halloween! We had 7 kids come to our door for 'trick or treat'! Not too many young kids in our neighborhood these days! :( :( Hugs, Sandra
Parker Avatar
October 30, 2017 at 5:18 PM
this story plays out across the nation more times than we know, well written...good luck
Haight Avatar
November 3, 2017 at 4:10 PM
Yes, it does, Frederic. In our case, the bridge was much needed for the good of all...but sad for those who had to lose their homes. Thanks for your nice visit! Sandra
Pandit Avatar
October 30, 2017 at 11:30 AM
Well written, Sandra--best for win!
Haight Avatar
November 3, 2017 at 4:08 PM
Thank you once again, Vijay, for your nice visits and uplifting comments. Sandra
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