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From lion to cat

Back home the lion of the office turns to a cat © kash poet ===========000========== Placement: 3rd; (October 2012) Contest: Single Senryu Sponsor: Susan Burch ===========000==========

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Date: 11/7/2012 6:58:00 PM
I have seen many men make this transformation when they are in the presence of their wives. As tweety would say. "I tawt I saw a puddy cat."
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Date: 10/5/2012 5:47:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Black Eyed Susan's "Single Senryu contest Kash. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/2/2012 10:53:00 PM
Lovely Kash. Many congrats for this win.
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Date: 10/2/2012 1:25:00 PM
KASH, Congratulations with your awesome win in Susan's "Single Senryu" contest. ~ :-) xox~ PD
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Date: 10/2/2012 8:15:00 AM
congrats on ur win....:))))
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Date: 10/2/2012 3:36:00 AM
Ha! This thing called irony. Nicely done Kash! Congrats on your win!
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Date: 10/1/2012 9:24:00 PM
That's probably true of most people who work. Well done and a great idea for this poem. Congratulations on your win. Meow and wow. lee
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Date: 10/1/2012 6:08:00 PM
Love it - congratulations. Sounds like my husband.
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Date: 10/1/2012 4:38:00 PM
Big Congrats for this wonderful piece,Kash..Good job...
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Date: 10/1/2012 2:28:00 PM
WAY to GO. ONe of my favorites here. Congrats, KAshinath. I am here for two hours at the school and after today, I don't know. but hopefully I can catch up from so much I missed on the weekend!
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Date: 10/1/2012 1:24:00 PM
Congratulations Kash well done xx
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Date: 9/30/2012 10:13:00 AM
hahahahahahaa.. just cant stop laughing!!!
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Date: 9/21/2012 10:27:00 PM
It is true. But, sometimes the situation is quite the opposite.
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Date: 9/21/2012 4:33:00 PM
Quite a difference in size and temperments in those two animals..Enjoyed reading your creative work this eve..Thanks for stopping by..Sara
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Date: 9/21/2012 11:53:00 AM
hehe, I love your wit and soh Kash :)
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Date: 9/21/2012 11:43:00 AM
got more, lion king? meeoww!.. huggs, kashi!
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Date: 9/21/2012 8:55:00 AM
Maybe some of them even turn into a mouse, when they greet their spouse?? What a cute senryu this is!!
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Date: 9/21/2012 8:18:00 AM
Oh much better than the other way round. I like this. Thank you for your tip. I was working too late last night. Love, Joyce
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Date: 9/21/2012 5:06:00 AM
hilarious and well-done! i've really enjoyed reading it, Kash! Good luck and best wishes in the contest! Thank you for stopping by and your wonderful comment! Have a nice day!!! hugs:) Leonora
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Date: 9/21/2012 1:25:00 AM
Haha real good one Kash. Thanks for your comments.
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Date: 9/20/2012 10:51:00 PM
In my past, I've worked with lions of the office that were really rats. How I would have loved to put out poisoned cheese for them! Good senryu Kash.
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Date: 9/20/2012 9:08:00 PM
interesting lines present a myriad of visuals Kash .. good luck luv ..
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Date: 9/20/2012 8:40:00 PM
Kash, you should say for that last line: kitty cat again! Shows he is really sweet at home. I love this. Did you ever do that one poem for Endless Love yet? I was looking for it from you. I saw there was one spot still open. I had not put mine in the contest when you saw it because I was at school on a break. I have since revised it and entered it. luv, andrea
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Date: 9/20/2012 2:27:00 PM
yabadabadoo!... love the aha moment, kashi.. for the contest??... terrific!..:) huggs
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Date: 9/20/2012 10:07:00 AM
hahahahahaha.....a very nice senryu...Thanks for the comments on my poems....means a lot to me....:))))))))))
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