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ArtStation - Transcending 2.0

Dripping dripping, the sound resounding Like echoes abounding Stronger stronger, louder sounding My head is pounding Throbbing throbbing the pain is increasing Like a jack hammer never unceasing Longing longing for the pains decreasing Too much pain, I need the releasing Like soft white clouds, floating in the wind I feel the medication like a comforting friend Thanks for the help, no hope I could mend Show thy mercy let my life now transcend I’ll patiently wait in a place without time We’ll love for eternity in this place so sublime

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Date: 7/30/2025 4:35:00 PM
another outstanding Sonnet, dear hubby! I found myself totally engaged in your poem that successfully told a story. The ending is perfect, hugs, Sara
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Date: 7/30/2025 8:36:00 PM
Thanks for reading all my poems, Sara. I'm trying to keep up with all of yours too. Happy Trails! Bill

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