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From Here To Eternity

Dripping dripping, the sound resounding
Like echoes abounding
Stronger stronger, louder sounding 
My head is pounding

Throbbing throbbing the pain is increasing
Like a jack hammer never unceasing
Longing longing for the pains decreasing
Too much pain, I need the releasing

Like soft white clouds, floating in the wind
I feel the medication like a comforting friend
Thanks for the help, no hope I could mend
Show thy mercy let my life now transcend

I’ll patiently wait in a place without time
We’ll love for eternity in this place so sublime
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Velasco Avatar
August 21, 2025 at 2:48 PM
Raw and powerful ove how it moves from pain to peace so vividly.
Etgen-Baker Avatar
July 30, 2025 at 4:35 PM
another outstanding Sonnet, dear hubby! I found myself totally engaged in your poem that successfully told a story. The ending is perfect, hugs, Sara
Baker Avatar
July 30, 2025 at 8:36 PM
Thanks for reading all my poems, Sara. I'm trying to keep up with all of yours too. Happy Trails! Bill
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