Lin Lane Poet Pleiades

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Frolic - a Pleiades

Flights of such fantasy
    Fill all my senses with
      Foolish thoughts of being
        Free-spirited as a
          Fluttering butterfly,
            Floating on clouds made of
               Fancy marshmallow puffs.

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Michael Tor December 1, 2015 at 4:45 PM Congratulations on your win Lin!

Dr. Upma A. Sharma November 29, 2015 at 10:53 PM Congrats on ur superb win Lin with this lovely write! Lin Lane November 30, 2015 at 4:05 AM Thanks a lot, Upma.

Sandra Haight November 29, 2015 at 8:24 AM Beautiful, Lin. Congratulations on your fine win. Hugs, Sandra Lin Lane November 29, 2015 at 8:46 AM And a hug back to you, Sandra. Thanks so much!

Charlotte Puddifoot November 29, 2015 at 6:15 AM fantastical flight of fantasy for the senses - congrats on your 1st place! Lin Lane November 29, 2015 at 6:21 AM Thank you very much, Charlotte.

Alexis Y. November 28, 2015 at 6:44 PM Lin, congrats on your 1st place win it was well deserved:-) Alexis Lin Lane November 28, 2015 at 6:54 PM Thanks so much, Alexis.

Skat A November 28, 2015 at 3:22 PM Lin, Congrats on your fine win, SKAT LOVE Lin Lane November 28, 2015 at 6:53 PM Thanks a bunch, skat.

Nayda Ivette Negron Flores November 28, 2015 at 5:06 AM Congratulations Lin Lin Lane November 28, 2015 at 5:21 AM Hi, Nayda...thank you so much.

John Hamilton November 27, 2015 at 10:56 PM Nice job Lin, loved the layered effect in sentences, congrats well deserved first place. John Lin Lane November 27, 2015 at 11:01 PM Thanks, John. I appreciate your comments.

Eve Roper November 27, 2015 at 8:27 PM Lin, I like the subject you chose and the beautiful flow to your poem, congratulations on your 1st place win. Hugs Eve Lin Lane November 27, 2015 at 11:01 PM Thank you lots, Eve.

Connie Marcum Wong November 27, 2015 at 6:06 PM I loved this playful pleiades Lin. Congratulations on your top placement! Lin Lane November 27, 2015 at 11:00 PM I appreciate you reading me, Connie.

Jan Allison November 27, 2015 at 4:45 PM delightful poem Lin congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx Lin Lane November 27, 2015 at 10:59 PM Thanks a bunch, Jan.

Kim Merryman November 27, 2015 at 3:16 PM Lin, I love this whimsical write! Congrats on your 1st place win and on learning a new poetry form! Love, Kim Lin Lane November 27, 2015 at 10:58 PM Thank you VERY much, Kim.

Sarita Milliner November 22, 2015 at 10:55 AM This one made me smile. I love butterflies!! Lin Lane November 22, 2015 at 12:27 PM Goodness! Take a few of them home with you. Nice to see you're hangin' with me today. ;)