William Kelii Kekaula Poet Free verse

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Frisky As Two-Year-Olds

*Image of Conhece-te a ti mesmo (Know thyself) by Pinterest.


Frisky as Two-Year-Olds


HIM: Anything unputdownable?
HER: Yes, and you?
HIM: Lucky, we're here, we'll continue indoors ... and leave the book!
HER: Don't forget the kids, I'll carry Puddy-Tat upstairs ...
HIM: I'll persuade Pup-Tart outside.
HER: Meet you at the rendezvous!

2022 July 25
*3rd Place*
Short verse inspired by pictures
~~Lisa YY: Judged 2022 August 09

*PS Grammar; 40 words exact

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Christuraj Alex August 10, 2022 at 4:21 AM Dramatically done. Congratulations! William Kelii Kekaula August 10, 2022 at 4:36 AM 'Twas fun, Christuraj, thanks, Aloha~William

Connie Marcum Wong August 6, 2022 at 7:52 PM This is such a cute entry William. Still smiling. Thank you. Blessings xxoo William Kelii Kekaula August 6, 2022 at 9:43 PM Thanks for the perk, Connie, an indelible piece I must say my friend, Aloha~William

Constance La France August 3, 2022 at 10:07 AM Hilo, I love this sweet poem, delightful, and best of luck in the contest, blessings ~Constance William Kelii Kekaula August 3, 2022 at 10:25 AM Thank you, Constance, for your thought-filled sentiments truly my friend, Aloha~William

I Am Anaya July 28, 2022 at 1:36 PM First line struck me as hey...something I would say. this is such a cute frisky tale! Good luck in the contest! ~Anaya William Kelii Kekaula July 28, 2022 at 2:31 PM Hehe! Thought it'd be thorough throughout, Anaya, thanks for your sentiments and boost my friend, Aloha~William

Anisha Dutta July 28, 2022 at 4:47 AM WOW Witty Really Enjoyed Blessings William Kelii Kekaula July 28, 2022 at 10:59 AM Thanks, Anisha, I'll soupmail you soon my friend, Aloha~William

Andrea Dietrich July 26, 2022 at 11:49 AM wow, 40 words exact!! William Kelii Kekaula July 26, 2022 at 11:55 AM To keep up, Andrea, I struggle a bit but I try, c'est la vie mon amie, Aloha~William

Kim Rodrigues July 25, 2022 at 4:23 AM Cute! William Kelii Kekaula July 25, 2022 at 4:34 AM Thanks, Kim, quick my friend, Aloha~William