Frisbee Dog

The man took me to the Dog Park, I think his name is Jim.
He brought along a round thing, a disk made out of plastic.
He put it close by my nose, so I sniffed it round the rim.
I've sniffed vinyl many times, and didn't think it fantastic.

Then Jim became animated. His eyes became alert.
Then he threw the disk with all his strength, aiming for the sky.
The disk spun up above us and then came crashing to the dirt.
I felt bad for him and thought, "Jim, you gave it your best try".

Jim gave a wave to Bob who stood with his dog at the Park.
His sheltie was friendly, though he tired anybody out.
I gave a woof and the sheltie sent back a greeting bark.
When Jim threw the disk, the sheltie knew what it was about.

Bob's dog leapt like a dancer with moves like a Frisbee ace.
His jaws wrapped around the disk while he floated in the air.
Jim's dog had to try it, and occasionally won the race.
Now Jim's dog and the sheltie are known as the Frisbee pair.
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George Avatar
November 1, 2024 at 4:47 AM
Really a time of animated enjoyment. Enjoyed the game of Frisbee between Jim's dog and the sheltie! Dogs enjoy playing with Frisbee...and I enjoyed this beautifully rhyming poem.
Greenhough Avatar
November 1, 2024 at 8:29 PM
Thank you. The dogs outshone their masters in this poem. I appreciated your comment.
May Avatar
October 24, 2024 at 8:07 AM
I enjoyed this story of dogs and frisbees Hilda, Love the way you told it
Greenhough Avatar
October 26, 2024 at 3:22 PM
Thank you. I thought it was good from the perspective of a dog. I think pets are wonderful subjects for poetry. Glad you visited.
Kerr Avatar
February 5, 2024 at 1:42 AM
Lighthearted and whimsical in nature. Exceptional narration and character sketch
Greenhough Avatar
March 9, 2024 at 7:28 PM
This is definitely fiction. The dog's persona switches with the owners. Thanks for reading.
DiMino Avatar
October 4, 2023 at 7:29 AM
Very cute, and well written! Everything is better with a good partner -- wife my best friends as well -- I guess, to martians maybe, we are little more than shelties and what-not. Delightful, fun read. Thank you.
Greenhough Avatar
October 4, 2023 at 7:43 AM
Thsnks. Who knows, martians might have 'dogs' too. Animals are fascinating.
Baker Avatar
October 3, 2023 at 3:56 PM
Made me smile with this one, Hilda. I needed a little light poetry today! Thanks for sharing a little humor. Welcome to Poetry Soup! Smiles ~ Blessings Bill
Greenhough Avatar
October 3, 2023 at 5:37 PM
Thsnk you. A dog can always bring cheer in a poem.
Lamoureux Avatar
October 3, 2023 at 2:13 PM
This is a fun one.
Greenhough Avatar
October 3, 2023 at 2:29 PM
Yes, it was fun. Thank you.
Hinshaw Avatar
October 3, 2023 at 1:16 PM
Hilda, I thoroughly enjoyed this very delightful and creative verse! My kind of poetry! Bob H
Greenhough Avatar
October 3, 2023 at 2:28 PM
Thank you. It was fun to write.
Allison Avatar
October 1, 2023 at 9:31 PM
aww this is so cute Hilda, thanks for sharing:-) hugs jan xx
Greenhough Avatar
October 1, 2023 at 10:11 PM
I'm glad you liked it. Thanks.
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