Friends, the Barmaid and I

I was not a drinker, I must confess.
Well, once in a while I would transgress.
A studying student perched on the stool 
Avoided eye contact and men's lusty drool.

One quiet afternoon visiting the barmaid,
No one was in the club to cause a tirade.
Three drunks came in for a mid-day drink.
They put up cash; their coins made a clink.

I started to leave, but she asked me to stay.
New comers to the bar, first time, that day.
Partially smashed, they started to glare.
I could hardly bear their shameless stare.

I sat at the counter drinking my water.
Before too long, those three became brasher.
Buy her a drink; No, thank you, I said.
If eyes could kill, I would have been dead.

A bit unruly, they became quite insistent.
I ordered my usual; they happily gave payment.
Three glasses of water I drank that day.
We played pool when they went on their way.

© October 30, 2011


Written for Poetry Soup Member Contest:  Confessions to a Bartender 	
Sponsored by: Natalie :) The Rogue Rhymer
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November 7, 2011 at 5:45 AM
A belated congratulations I am sending you this morning for your win in Natalie's contest Dane-Ann. Love, Carol
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November 8, 2011 at 2:55 PM
Thank you for reading my work and for sending your congratulations. Smiles.
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November 5, 2011 at 10:42 PM
DANE;-) CONGRATULATIONS, ON YOUR WIN~ Have a wonderful weekend, GOD BLESS,..p.d.
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November 8, 2011 at 2:55 PM
Thank you for reading my work and for sending your congratulations. Smiles.
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November 4, 2011 at 2:58 PM
Congratulations on your win in the Bartender contest Dane Ann
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November 8, 2011 at 2:56 PM
Thank you for reading my work and for sending your congratulations. Smiles.
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November 4, 2011 at 1:21 PM
I'm wondering if this is a true story, dear friend. It sounds so much like the real you. Congratulations on your win in Natalie's contest! Love, Carolyn
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November 8, 2011 at 2:56 PM
Thank you for reading my work and for sending your congratulations. Smiles. (I'll never tell!...okay. It happened!)
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November 4, 2011 at 11:42 AM
Dane-I liked the 'different' perspective :) here-Many congrats. on your win in my contest!
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November 8, 2011 at 2:57 PM
Thank you for reading my work and for sending your congratulations. It is a little different than usual, but time matures us...hopefully. Smiles.
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November 4, 2011 at 10:06 AM
Congrats Dane Ann for another brilliant win for this creative write for the bartender contest luv..
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November 8, 2011 at 2:57 PM
Thank you for reading my work and for sending your congratulations. Smiles.
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