Jared Pickett Poet Free verse

Friends, Better Lovers *2*

Oh my...
Soothing, our melody.
Cries of passion we erupt in song,
doing things we know are wrong.
you light my fire,
I am what you desire,
your sensual verses inspire,
only you and I in this choir.
Deep inside,
your mind and more
I want all that you can give.
Let me explore
deep into your core.

Oh my,
am I sore,
I can hardly walk to the door.
my legs are weak,
like I have just come to shore.
I adore
your sexuality, 
the way that you implore,
when I am deep inside
your body and mind,
giving you what you want and more.

Do friends make better lovers?
I don't know if that is true,
All I know is that I am content,
deep inside of you....

The conclusion to this poem is written by our very own Linda Marie-Bariana.."Sweetheart"
Visit her page for the must read ending that will send shock waves through our community...

Jared Pickett
12/8/09	
Asavvy1

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Doris Culverhouse December 10, 2009 at 1:58 PM sexy poem,

Colleen Bono December 10, 2009 at 9:52 AM Good morning.Hope all is well.

Sara Kendrick December 10, 2009 at 9:39 AM Interesting love tale presented here. Keep the magical pen flowing. Sara

Linda-Marie Sweetheart December 10, 2009 at 5:27 AM SOUP MAIL .. call .. 4 U ... "Sweetheart"

Marty Owens December 9, 2009 at 7:51 PM Very nice 2nd part...Enjoyed...Marty

Linda-Marie Sweetheart December 9, 2009 at 7:32 PM SOUP MAIL for A Savvy 1 .. "Sweetheart"

James Fraser December 9, 2009 at 2:21 PM Excellent second part you two, it just oozes sensuality >> James

Charmaine Chircop December 9, 2009 at 1:57 PM Lovely poem indeed,from beginning to end..and good on you "Sweetheart"of the soup.. beautiful,Romantic and passionate indeed--Charma

John Loving Iii December 9, 2009 at 1:49 PM excitement and enfacuation. a distructive force no matter how you add it up. john

Lena Townsend December 9, 2009 at 9:11 AM Wow... Hot and steamy in here now. I have to say that I agree with Constance, the best lover is a friend first. Well penned. Smiles from Lolita

Constance La France December 9, 2009 at 9:03 AM Nothing like a little erotica to get the pen flowing. Is it hot in here? I was seduced from the Part 1. And I think, the best lover is a friend first....

Richard Pickett December 9, 2009 at 7:07 AM That's my boy...Always liked the romantic ones didn't you?...Dad

Tobey Hill December 9, 2009 at 6:41 AM very nice Jared....TAH

Linda-Marie Sweetheart December 9, 2009 at 5:09 AM I am so pleased that u liked the ending of this story... one must move on with wonderful memories (if they are there) but still on a intricate quest to journey for the sake of luv.. I so enjoyed this write with U and lets do it again soon... I believe we are getting "rave reviews" for this saga... and remember... for every ending there is a new beginning to look forward to... U have already begun... blessing... luv... Soup Mail me your new ideas for next venture... luv.. "Sweetheart"

Linda-Marie Sweetheart December 8, 2009 at 8:27 PM OK following your thought pattern.. I can totally relate to lost loves .. and lost friendships... mix them together and u get Part 3 .. so read and see if I did justice to the story u started... luv.. "Sweetheart"

Mary Meade Stephenson December 8, 2009 at 7:15 PM Awesome job...romantic, passionate and can feel the emotions through the words..thanks so much for sharing and for your kind comments~Mary

John Freeman December 8, 2009 at 7:00 PM No soul in the act if not a friend.Smile. Moses

Linda-Marie Sweetheart December 8, 2009 at 6:55 PM Soup Mail 4 U .. my co writer friend.. will try to do the ending justice... "Sweetheart"

Carolyn Devonshire December 8, 2009 at 3:51 PM Friends do seem to make better lovers because there isn't the awkward feeling that accompanies being with someone you don't really know. What could be better than finding both friendship and love with one person? Very nice, Jared. Love, Carolyn

Charmaine Chircop December 8, 2009 at 2:33 PM Jared a special friend of mine once told me,lovers come and go but friendship is forever..and this is so true..friendship is the most beautiful thing,,Friendship may lead deeper or it might remain pure innocent friendship...friendship is a gift when its true,beautiful poem--Charma