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Friday Feeling

FRIDAY FEELING Since I was seven Friday feeling, so special. Saturday ahead. Flavor of holiday peeps. Sweet fragrance igniting thrill On higher study, Happy Friday feelings changed. Classes over week No break. So! Friday feeling got transformed on Saturday. On service, Friday came gorgeous glorious, giving two off- days, both Friday and Saturday. Sweet scent of full bloom flower flowing from Friday morning. Onward so engaged! Work-work-work! Raising children, caring career. Work subsisting on week end. Friday feelings were just changed. Reached last phase of life. All rest, no work making dull Reminiscence of thrill, Most special Friday feeling failing to find its lost place. 02/25/18 'Friday feeling' Contest by Silent One.

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Date: 4/9/2018 4:54:00 PM
Amazing how you so quickly ran through all the phases of life of your active life, Anisha. Congrats on your win.
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Date: 3/12/2018 9:26:00 AM
A great string of Tanka that presents your Fridays through the years, Anisha! Congratulations on your placement! Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 3/11/2018 11:20:00 PM
"last phrase of life"...failing to find it's lost place" . Love how worded this, understand why you placed, and congrats. to you. But hope...Not True! If like to read a different reaction to same... last phrase of life ..visit me, I'll be back to see you. ! Congrats! bbn
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Date: 3/11/2018 12:54:00 PM
- Congratulations on your winning poem, Anisha :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 3/11/2018 10:03:00 AM
Lovely story telling Anisha.. Congratulations on your placement..
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Date: 2/26/2018 1:16:00 AM
lovely take on the theme sweet Anisha, good luck! :)-luloo
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Date: 2/25/2018 1:09:00 PM
- A lovely feeling and a lovely description, Anisha :) - Best wishes in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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