Fresh Air

I once got a terrible cold,
Or an allergy from some mold.
All I said was, “ah-chew,”
And I constantly blew,
Until fresh air got it controlled.


By: Greg Stanley

For Gwen's Contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Pettit Avatar
December 28, 2011 at 10:50 PM
Gwendolyn should like this one for her contest. Well written and descriptive; the way any good limerick poem should be.
Kendrick Avatar
December 28, 2011 at 1:41 PM
Hate those allergies..Great way to tell about it..Good luck in the contest..Reads like a winner..Thanks for stopping by..Sara
The Rogue Rhymer Avatar
December 27, 2011 at 8:48 PM
Greg-such a charming little poem :) Good luck to you in the contest!
Gorelick Avatar
December 27, 2011 at 8:19 PM
Pass the kleenex...cute one...BG
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