French Bread

French Bread
	
	
	Your index finger 
	draws figure-eights 
	in the dusting of flour 
	on the counter top 
	where you lean
	quite casually, 
	watching as I make 
	a loaf of French bread. 
	Then, laughing a bit, 
	you insert your powdery finger 
	into my right ear. 
	
 	I’m startled... 
	I was so very focused 
	on assembling ingredients 
	that I wasn’t aware 
	of my surroundings, 
	at least not enough to see 
	your finger inching its way 
	toward me. I laugh too, 
	realizing the intimacy 
	of your floured finger.
	Somehow,
	I don’t believe 
	your interest is in my baking,
	 
	but I proceed on to 
	proofing the yeast 
	in warm water, 
	watching carefully 
	for the always-shocking 
	bloom’s suggestion 
	of the possible, 
	our palates fine-tuned 
	to the perfume 
	of earth and damp places.
	
	Thus begins the slow tango 
	of dryness becoming wet, 
	a touch of salt-taste, 
	elements bound together 
	by the slippery 
	until there is inseparable oneness, 
	deep warmth in the joining, 
	the inevitable rising, 
	swelling    seeking relief. 
	
	But not yet, oh no... 
	
	First there must be a pause, 
	a relaxation of the engorged, 
	consummation delayed,
	then the pressure of my hands, 
	pressing-on, 
	pressing and shaping and pressing.
 
	We sip our wine, 
	talk quietly, anticipating 
	the inevitable increase, 
	saying between us,
     		“We’re ready for the final phase:
      		the heat that binds, 
      		coalesces the disparate ingredients, 
      		yielding at last to the 
      		inevitable    delectable     finish.”
	
	Later, cooling as it always must, 
	we can’t resist 
	nibbling still-warm bits 
	dipped in melted butter, 
	feeding them to each other, 
	transcending words, 
	finding new ways of seeing
	one another.
	
	
	Written November 23, 2013
	for Charlotte’s Scorchers.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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De Beaulieu Avatar
September 14, 2024 at 2:55 PM
Hello Jack Jordon, So nice to meet you. Oh, what fu you both had. MY deceased husbanduse to make chocolates. He did make bread by himself. he only needed help to make chocolates. enjoy your evening my friend. /Darlene/.
Meyer Avatar
September 14, 2024 at 9:39 AM
Really loved the French Bread poem. The warmth rose with the bread. Great work.
Cloyd Avatar
September 14, 2024 at 8:24 AM
You have a beautiful way of writing and describing actions that coincide with real life, I loved reading all your poems - good job!
Godleske Avatar
September 14, 2024 at 7:53 AM
And then we ate bread. LOL. Awesome poem, Jack! Loved every line. Best, M.
Sewell Avatar
March 11, 2015 at 2:11 AM
This is wonderful, Jack! This is going onto my fav list :)
A   Avatar
December 11, 2013 at 9:56 AM
Wonderful win jack.... Congratulations in "'Charlotte's Scorchers: Erotic/Sensual Poetry''...have a nice one... LUV LINDA
Jordan Avatar
December 11, 2013 at 10:46 AM
Thanks, and the same for you... Jack
Dietrich Avatar
December 8, 2013 at 4:17 PM
yes, yes yes, your first attempt at erotica is a huge success. CONGRATS.
Jordan Avatar
December 8, 2013 at 9:09 PM
Thanks! This may be a new direction for me. Who knows??? Jack
Hamilton Avatar
December 7, 2013 at 7:29 PM
a lovely sensual poem Jack congrats on win Shadow x smile hug
Jordan Avatar
December 7, 2013 at 8:50 PM
Thank you, Shadow... Jack
Jones Avatar
December 7, 2013 at 7:24 PM
Awesome win Jack...just awesome...congratulations....
Jordan Avatar
December 7, 2013 at 8:51 PM
Thanks, Donna, for the lovely congrats... Jack
Guzzi Avatar
December 7, 2013 at 5:43 PM
Masterful, exquisite! to my fav's Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
Jordan Avatar
December 7, 2013 at 8:51 PM
Thanks, Debbie. That's a real honor... jack
Puddifoot Avatar
December 7, 2013 at 5:33 PM
how happy I am to see you among my top winners, jack! this is a subtly sensual piece, well thought out and elegantly penned; I enjoyed it immensely - congrats on your win! :)
Jordan Avatar
December 7, 2013 at 8:53 PM
And thank you for placing my poem in your contest. I appreciate your comments about cliches. It was a real help. I enjoyed writing it... Jack
Dietrich Avatar
November 24, 2013 at 2:36 AM
oh my goodness, now this is erotica very TASTEFULLY done. I just love your way of writing this!!!!
Jordan Avatar
November 24, 2013 at 11:48 AM
My first attempt at writing erotica per se. Not an easy task. Thanks for the comment... Jack
Jones Avatar
November 23, 2013 at 8:35 PM
Wow.....now that's HOT.... And back to the weather to cool off...the always changing OK weather is why I love it here so much!!,..:-) :-)
Jordan Avatar
November 23, 2013 at 11:07 PM
Thanks! Well, there's cool and there's COOL! Jack
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