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French Bread

French Bread
	
	
	Your index finger 
	draws figure-eights 
	in the dusting of flour 
	on the counter top 
	where you lean
	quite casually, 
	watching as I make 
	a loaf of French bread. 
	Then, laughing a bit, 
	you insert your powdery finger 
	into my right ear. 
	
 	I’m startled... 
	I was so very focused 
	on assembling ingredients 
	that I wasn’t aware 
	of my surroundings, 
	at least not enough to see 
	your finger inching its way 
	toward me. I laugh too, 
	realizing the intimacy 
	of your floured finger.
	Somehow,
	I don’t believe 
	your interest is in my baking,
	 
	but I proceed on to 
	proofing the yeast 
	in warm water, 
	watching carefully 
	for the always-shocking 
	bloom’s suggestion 
	of the possible, 
	our palates fine-tuned 
	to the perfume 
	of earth and damp places.
	
	Thus begins the slow tango 
	of dryness becoming wet, 
	a touch of salt-taste, 
	elements bound together 
	by the slippery 
	until there is inseparable oneness, 
	deep warmth in the joining, 
	the inevitable rising, 
	swelling    seeking relief. 
	
	But not yet, oh no... 
	
	First there must be a pause, 
	a relaxation of the engorged, 
	consummation delayed,
	then the pressure of my hands, 
	pressing-on, 
	pressing and shaping and pressing.
 
	We sip our wine, 
	talk quietly, anticipating 
	the inevitable increase, 
	saying between us,
     		“We’re ready for the final phase:
      		the heat that binds, 
      		coalesces the disparate ingredients, 
      		yielding at last to the 
      		inevitable    delectable     finish.”
	
	Later, cooling as it always must, 
	we can’t resist 
	nibbling still-warm bits 
	dipped in melted butter, 
	feeding them to each other, 
	transcending words, 
	finding new ways of seeing
	one another.
	
	
	Written November 23, 2013
	for Charlotte’s Scorchers.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 9/14/2024 2:55:00 PM
Hello Jack Jordon, So nice to meet you. Oh, what fu you both had. MY deceased husbanduse to make chocolates. He did make bread by himself. he only needed help to make chocolates. enjoy your evening my friend. /Darlene/.
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Date: 9/14/2024 9:39:00 AM
Really loved the French Bread poem. The warmth rose with the bread. Great work.
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Date: 9/14/2024 8:24:00 AM
You have a beautiful way of writing and describing actions that coincide with real life, I loved reading all your poems - good job!
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Date: 9/14/2024 7:53:00 AM
And then we ate bread. LOL. Awesome poem, Jack! Loved every line. Best, M.
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Date: 3/11/2015 2:11:00 AM
This is wonderful, Jack! This is going onto my fav list :)
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Date: 12/11/2013 9:56:00 AM
Wonderful win jack.... Congratulations in "'Charlotte's Scorchers: Erotic/Sensual Poetry''...have a nice one... LUV LINDA
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Jack Jordan
Date: 12/11/2013 10:46:00 AM
Thanks, and the same for you... Jack
Date: 12/8/2013 4:17:00 PM
yes, yes yes, your first attempt at erotica is a huge success. CONGRATS.
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Date: 12/8/2013 9:09:00 PM
Thanks! This may be a new direction for me. Who knows??? Jack
Date: 12/7/2013 7:29:00 PM
a lovely sensual poem Jack congrats on win Shadow x smile hug
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Date: 12/7/2013 8:50:00 PM
Thank you, Shadow... Jack
Date: 12/7/2013 7:24:00 PM
Awesome win Jack...just awesome...congratulations....
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Date: 12/7/2013 8:51:00 PM
Thanks, Donna, for the lovely congrats... Jack
Date: 12/7/2013 5:43:00 PM
Masterful, exquisite! to my fav's Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Date: 12/7/2013 8:51:00 PM
Thanks, Debbie. That's a real honor... jack
Date: 12/7/2013 5:33:00 PM
how happy I am to see you among my top winners, jack! this is a subtly sensual piece, well thought out and elegantly penned; I enjoyed it immensely - congrats on your win! :)
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Date: 12/7/2013 8:53:00 PM
And thank you for placing my poem in your contest. I appreciate your comments about cliches. It was a real help. I enjoyed writing it... Jack
Date: 11/24/2013 2:36:00 AM
oh my goodness, now this is erotica very TASTEFULLY done. I just love your way of writing this!!!!
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Date: 11/24/2013 11:48:00 AM
My first attempt at writing erotica per se. Not an easy task. Thanks for the comment... Jack
Date: 11/23/2013 8:35:00 PM
Wow.....now that's HOT.... And back to the weather to cool off...the always changing OK weather is why I love it here so much!!,..:-) :-)
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Date: 11/23/2013 11:07:00 PM
Thanks! Well, there's cool and there's COOL! Jack

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