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Freezing Rain

Freezing rain leaves shiny streets Wildlife search for winter treats Frozen raindrops line the branches Fog leaves nearby sights to chances Whether brave enough to walk in slippery haze It’s one of those cozy, inside days Where the fire burns to bring the light So the day doesn’t feel so much like night Heidi Sands 11/25/22

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Wendy Sayers

Date: 11/26/2022 2:05:00 AM

Lovely poem Heidi, makes me want to snuggle indoors too

Heidi Sands
Date: 11/26/2022 5:00:00 AM

Thank you Wendy. Yes, these type days are snuggle inside days :)

Deb M

Date: 11/25/2022 5:18:00 PM

Winter so beautifully described Heidi ….love this poem!! Debx

Heidi Sands
Date: 11/26/2022 5:00:00 AM

Thabk you very much Deb. I hope you have a nice day :)

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 11/25/2022 4:09:00 PM

Hello Heidi, Freezing rain is dangerous to walk and drive. No one has balance on icy sidewalks or on the icy roads. Hugs.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 11/26/2022 10:53:00 AM

Hello Heidi, Ido not walk vey wll in the deep snow. I walk carefully on icy sidewalks and roads. My whole body stiffens up on the icy sidewalks. Hugs.

Heidi Sands
Date: 11/26/2022 4:59:00 AM

You are right Darlene. Ice is very dangerous. I learned that once getting a head trauma and brain bleed , falling on snow covered ice ! Thank you for your comment. Hugs :)

Nancy Kaufman

Date: 11/25/2022 2:24:00 PM

You captured winter so well in this write Heidi. enjoyed it.

Heidi Sands
Date: 11/25/2022 2:58:00 PM

Thank you very much Nancy. I appreciate your kind comment :)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 11/25/2022 1:11:00 PM

Much beauty in onset of wintry, frigid days--as your poem skillfully conveys, Heidi.

Heidi Sands
Date: 11/25/2022 2:57:00 PM

Thank you Vijay.. i appreciate your kindness. I hope you have a nice evening :)

Sotto Poet

Date: 11/25/2022 10:54:00 AM

Heidi, you have no idea how much I like this. From the first to the final lyric, the entire thing exudes tenderness and is crafted with such skill.

Heidi Sands
Date: 11/25/2022 11:00:00 AM

That is so nice of you to say. Thank you very much for your kind feedback. I am grateful :)