Freeze Tag Players - Mosquito Treats
I was frozen in place when
I felt it “bite me” – a nip
On my neck from a pesky
Mosquito – oh no!
I couldn’t move to kill it,
So I stayed still. But cringed when
I saw the mosquito land
On Deborah’s nose!
4/7/12
Susan Burch
For Linda's "Bite Me" contest
Bit Deborah Burch
Copyright © Black Eyed Susan | Year Posted 2012
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