Freeing Herself

the splendor of an essence, delicate yet
firm is called

woman…

awed by her mystery through years,
thirst of rivers and shorelines never knew
her meaning,
her perfume and poison
mixed with elixir cloaked in legends 
which trace her tears, taste all maiden songs 
and still cannot touch her, own her

absence, presence--
many men crush this feminine generosity,
trampled, demeaned like a wilting flower
but she  is an eternal prayer, rising from 
violence and domesticity-

this is woman…

bequeath your shrines primitive or medieval
you are timeless,
give those who have one bare minute
a last glance of your soul’s courage
above, under and beyond
Mary's firm panels of heaven,

for despite any human cruelty, she prevails.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 7/10/2015 9:14:00 PM
A powerful write, Nette! Congrats on your fantastic win! Love, Kim
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Date: 7/7/2015 2:59:00 PM
Hi Nette, A lovely win, Love **SKAT**
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Date: 7/7/2015 2:02:00 PM
Nette, Congrats on your win. Always ~LINDA~
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Date: 7/7/2015 12:25:00 PM
Even the darkest of subjects, you have the talent to write about them so beautifully! Such contrast is your gift of the pen! Congratulations.......well deserved recognition !!
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Date: 7/7/2015 7:46:00 AM
You painted this with a wonderfully dark yet colourful brush. Congratulations.
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Date: 7/7/2015 3:37:00 AM
Wonderful write n win! Big congrats! Unbelievable u got screwed up ?
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Date: 5/26/2015 8:15:00 PM
a very bracing and vital piece. a woman realizing herself.
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Date: 5/6/2015 1:16:00 PM
Really touched by this situation. Impressed with your relating it!
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Date: 4/28/2015 7:37:00 AM
Emotion filled and powerful write my friend. One can not truly live until one has freedom of choice in life. Any form of abuse is not to be tolerated. Great poem!! A7
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Date: 4/27/2015 4:57:00 AM
There's sadness in the realization yet strengthening beauty in the self-affirmation. As always, your brand of delicate poetry speaks from the lines, dear Nette. A 7 and blessings for the contest! Hugs! Mabuhay! :)
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Date: 4/27/2015 1:43:00 AM
Hello, Nette. Congratulations on producing a superb piece of poetry! I apologize if i have misinterpreted your lines. It contains such a powerful theme that i suppose it depends upon the individual viewer and their personnel circumstances at the time as how they, as individuals, interpret it. My very best regards!! :) john. P.s A Seven!!
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Date: 4/27/2015 1:34:00 AM
I might have this all wrong but there is a feeling here of fleeing from a mans unreasonable and uncaring sexual demands; i really wish my ex-girlfriend could read this. She is guilty of the worst malaise that blights any adult relationship: Putting sex before real feelings based on trust and mutual respect! I cannot change my feelings of love for her - but i cannot help her either! What a tragedy: The worlds insatiable demand and appetite for so called sexual liberation at any cost...Tragic!!
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Date: 4/27/2015 12:51:00 AM
This is an excellent poem which makes one ponder..How will She end the husband's games.Will She be set free?Would She feel the moon's warmth and the soothing balm of thw tree?Would She feel the love of nature without the need of running away again.Will She put him down to live in the peace of her own home and world?.Ofcourse a favourite.
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Date: 4/27/2015 12:22:00 AM
i love the line with the word illusion... :) love the flow.. sad but quite true..
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Date: 4/26/2015 9:40:00 PM
I can feel her vulnerability. Beautiful write. #7
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Date: 4/26/2015 6:51:00 PM
nette, that is so important for being an adult, that love must not become needy. Great idea for the contest.
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Date: 4/26/2015 5:30:00 PM
Leaving me in such captivation, strong word choices/ unsettling descriptions. Those final lines capture and deliver the message of it all, dear Poetess.
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Date: 4/26/2015 5:27:00 PM
Interesting theme for the contest..Reads like a winner to me..Way to go..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
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