Freedom Sees - Part 1


"Freedom Sees - Part 1"

Sailing
her clear 
Aqua Green 
oceans
floating 
mysterious exotic
fragrant 
Dark Pink 
Yellow Frangipani Petals
surround her boat, 
gifts sent  
from the big fat bellied trees
in the Queen's Land,
standing fixated, 
rooted to the spot
they aren’t going anywhere
fast, that’s their lot on
Departure Shores,
waving their 
confetti dreams
at the Bamboo Queen
sailing adventuress
standing tall now
not down on her knees.

She’s surveying her pearl beds
Giant Burnt Orange
Lilac Lavendar 
Deep Emerald Green
Astropecten Articulatus
accompanying Royalty,
they are far from their 
familial home.
Hippocampus.
Syngnathidae, 
Olive, Ultra-Marine Blue.
Mate for life.
Sea Dragons. 
This is true.

Golden Glistening 
Burning Ball 
the Sun’s 
beckoning ascension, 
light beams,
dapple the surface
there is abundant 
life underneath
this, her verdant 
Sea Bed Circus.

Crystal clear deep waters
full of mothers and daughters
the nexus electric current
for her virtues
her sins,
her babbling 
ranting minions,
their downloading zone
go-with-the-flow.
A million zephyrs
cut the air,
they are calling HER
“HOME”.


(Lovejoy-Burton/2018 Jan)
For GVLM. 
For K, M, VC, LJ.


1. "The Messenger", Lisa Gerrard
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=LGc9nNi1LXU

2.
https://www.amandalinettemeder.com/blog/2014/1/27/10-signs-from-your-deceased-loved-ones

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Date: 1/7/2018 2:53:00 PM
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=QMESg_-qczQ
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Date: 1/7/2018 2:53:00 PM
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Date: 1/7/2018 4:49:00 AM
I must admit you mesmerize me with your writing style..."her verdant Sea Bed Circus. Crystal clear deep waters full of mothers and daughters"
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Leanne Lovejoy-Burton
Date: 1/7/2018 10:57:00 PM
I am now planting fresh seeds, for new blooms, sea bed and onwards, floating freedom towards the land I'm sailing to, where all shades of Blues bleed deep into Gypsy Rose Deep Vermilion...to bring forth something akin to Truth, hallowed pure colours of Royalty, working out who's who in this beautiful menagerie, this Zoo. Dark August morning into shining, Chocolate Cosmos blooms, dancing with purring, whirling, dervish stars shooting towards Singularity. The True Meaning of the Colour Purple. Mystery. Bleeds.
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Leanne Lovejoy-Burton
Date: 1/7/2018 5:14:00 AM
I take that as a huge compliment Arturo. Thank you. And isn't it strange, that the majority of my stories, although oriented towards the female of the species, not one bite from the female of the species...I love my stories, even if they may not be that unique. I will just keep writing them. Thank you.
Date: 1/7/2018 4:16:00 AM
Yes, it has significance...it's attached to memories of my mother. "Snapdragons and Dandy Lions". Tropical. The Pink Frangipani has the strongest perfume, a perfume hard to forget. So good choice for your poem...thank you for the compliment.
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Date: 1/7/2018 4:05:00 AM
Nice imagery... loving the Frangipani appearing everywhere...
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Date: 1/7/2018 1:15:00 AM
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=pU2NDAo69Nc
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