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_______________________________________ Jagged cliffs spilling the birth of spring chant murmurous whispers of beauty Each rainbow holding a memory in misty emotions hang breathless Where echoes falling from canyon heights bring a glistening hymnal to life And I, lone drifting back through this dream drown in a flooding moment of need _______________________________________ Poet - Rick Parise Contest - SOME FORM OF CRYSTALLINE Date - 11 - 2 - 2014

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Date: 11/8/2014 4:25:00 AM
Rick, the first 3 lines immediately captivated me and the rest drifted me off to a whole new level of beauty. am glad i read this today! gathered this earned a top win..Congratulations!!
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Date: 11/8/2014 4:16:00 AM
Well deserved place, congrats on the win, Rick
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Date: 11/7/2014 1:43:00 AM
rick, i enjoyed this read, felt like it was taken to a whole another level near the end. thank you for being part of my contest and wowie congrats!
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Date: 11/6/2014 11:07:00 PM
Rick this poem you have written is outstanding. Kudos on your high and well deserved placement!
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Date: 11/6/2014 9:47:00 PM
wowowow, one of the very best of the group, Rick. BIG congrats. Outstanding use of imagery.
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Date: 11/6/2014 9:04:00 PM
A sense of peace fills me with the hymn of your waterfall.. then you have me filled with longing for the dream inspired by the divine moment with your words. Excellent !!! Congratulations on your win !!
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Date: 11/6/2014 6:38:00 PM
Back Rick to congratulate you on your win.
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Date: 11/6/2014 3:19:00 PM
beautifully penned many congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xxx
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Date: 11/2/2014 8:37:00 PM
One of the best I have read on this theme. This will place very high if not first.
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Date: 11/2/2014 1:35:00 PM
Awesome work..I enjoyed reading your contest entry..Reads like a winner to me..Way to go..Thanks for the honor of placing in your contest..I appreciate you reading and finding my work worthy..Sara
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Date: 11/2/2014 11:55:00 AM
Wow !! Beautifully executed and such a pleasure to read !! I'm not a rainbow, but I'm hanging breathless !!
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