freedom

As long as I can see the sky I am free..

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/30/2024 10:04:00 AM

You are. . . Hopefully!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 11/29/2024 6:23:00 AM

- Congratulations on your winning line :) -

thriveni c mysore

Date: 11/28/2024 6:57:00 PM

congratulations dear poet. 'freedom' is precious. cheers.

Michael Tor

Date: 11/5/2024 4:34:00 PM

John few words with great substance and thought. The endless sky gives you the sense of freedom with it's endless space. I like the relationship between sky and freedom. Thank you for posting John Freedom is so important now with all that is taking place around the world. They can't take the sky away so visually we will always have our Freedom....

Jan Allison

Date: 11/5/2024 12:35:00 PM

true John!:-) hugs Jan xx

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 11/5/2024 11:34:00 AM

I enjoyed reading your wonderful Monoku write. Few words with much said. "Good Luck" if for contest.....Have a fun day writing away.............