Spring

It’s the dawn of a new day free blank canvas unveiled the sweetness of the air fills my lungs the calm after the rain fills my heart It’s a lovely spring morning everywhere flourishing buds and blooms I can taste it all as my lungs overflow with life, youth and freedom AP: Honorable Mention 2020 Submitted on March 9, 2018

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Kyle Kriticos

Date: 3/20/2018 9:48:00 PM

beautifully optimistic! I love it !

Line Gauthier
Date: 3/20/2018 10:42:00 PM

Thanks, Kyle. Much appreciated.

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 3/11/2018 4:30:00 AM

Optimism personified; I wish every day felt like this one!

Line Gauthier
Date: 3/11/2018 10:44:00 AM

Thanks for your lovely visit and comment, Caren.

Susan Ashley

Date: 3/10/2018 5:57:00 PM

Such lovely expression in your upbeat and vibrant poem Line. Spring truly is rejuvenating. Paint with wild abandon upon the canvas of the new day! Just beautiful my friend..

Line Gauthier
Date: 3/10/2018 6:20:00 PM

Thanks for your visit and comment, Susan. Much appreciated.

Sneha Rv

Date: 3/10/2018 3:42:00 AM

How lovely, so beautifully vivid and simple :)

Line Gauthier
Date: 3/10/2018 6:10:00 AM

Thank you for your visit and for leaving a comment, Sneha.