Freed Verse

As a poet who likes to make things rhyme,
It has been a mystery to me why some prefer "Free Verse".
I rarely, if ever at all, understand how to write in that style.
Perhaps, that is why I chose it here.

Like any poet, I have often been faced by a blank page in front of me.
That is my challenge, my gauntlet, the duel in which I must fight.
My words are the bullet, my thoughts the aim, my meaning the target.
You may ask, "Do I always hit my mark?
No.  Like a ballplayer swinging at strike three, it just makes an out.
But, walking back to the dugout of my team with bat in hand,
I hear them tell me, "Good swing, get 'em next time".

That is true in writing or painting or any artistry.
Those droughts come too often, quickly upon me, and last far too long.
Whenever I feel the pressure of staring at that blank page,
I just shut down for a time and wonder if I will ever write another word.

Then, some inspirational line comes into my head,
and I realize that it is my turn to step up to the plate again.
It is only at those times do I write what seem to me,
some of the best poetry that my soul will let me put together.
Oh, by no means does it have the sage of a Whitman, Arnold, or Sandburg.

But, it does have something that none of them ever could have.
It has my thoughts, impressions, gifts, talents, soul, and more.
That poem has only the words I was blessed enough to find.
Even if I strike out with this one...it is me!




I have tried to use allegory and allusion
in writing this.  Perhaps it is not your 
definition of "Free Verse", but it is my swing at the ball.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

Poem

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Marcum Wong Avatar
June 29, 2017 at 7:00 PM
A personalized version of free verse Dan, and very well composed my friend. I feel comfortable writing in both free verse and rhyme which all depends on my mood. I enjoyed your first attempt. Bravo! : )
Cwiak Avatar
June 30, 2017 at 2:50 PM
Thanks Connie. Not my first foray into the style, but one I am not used to doing. I appreciate your reading it and comments very much.
Turner Avatar
June 26, 2017 at 10:19 AM
This is excellent, Dan. Bravo!!! Don't worry though, I usually rhyme in all of my poems too:)
Cwiak Avatar
June 29, 2017 at 7:15 AM
Thanks Dan. I have read many of your poems and realize that you too, like rhyme. Perhaps it is the simplicity (or the difficulty) in putting together rhyme that attracts us to it. Again, thanks for your kind words.
Get a Premium Membership
Turn off ads, get more exposure for your poetry, and get more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Diverse Voices: The Poetry of Human Rights and the Pursuit of Peace