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Freed From Despair

I am in this inner body, Can't explain the way I feel; I can feel the outer senses, Can't rely to wind or sleet. As I pray I touch the planets, As I breathe, the moon sheds tears; The earth is hurt yet flawless, My mind can't grasp, we're free. Wanderers in a night without limits, Enjoy freedom through the air; Thus the waves sing loud their torture, Though, the midnight sun pleads rest.

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