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FREEBORN Now ‘cross the fields and woods bird songs ring out Unbounded exultation to survive Their voices each a freeborn joyous shout ‘I am still here, a presence, had you doubt?’ Through dark cold months to cling on then revive Now ‘cross the fields and woods bird songs ring out Each chant communicates to those about Imperative intent: continued strive Their voices each a freeborn joyous shout No gentle air to sooth a fractious pout But gesture to persist and so to thrive Now ‘cross the fields and woods bird songs ring out As sun ascends to reassure all doubt Lives then with procreation will contrive Their voices each a freeborn joyous shout The cyclic shape of life yet comes about With each repeat we greet all creatures live Now ‘cross the fields and woods bird songs ring out Their voices each a freeborn joyous shout

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Date: 6/10/2023 9:07:00 PM
Geoffrey, "Their voices each a freeborn joyous shout" A grand finale leading to new beginnings from one who called me friend. Touched so many with your keen wit and good humored ways. I'll miss the ones you meant to do, and I'll miss you. Excerpt from "The Lost Commandments" - "Thou shalt check your post and messages ~~ Your e-mails even junk ~~ There could be one that takes presages ~~ No matter what you thunk". Godspeed Geoffrey. -Richard
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Date: 5/30/2023 2:02:00 PM
Geoffrey, you left us a beautiful poem before flying above , rest in peace dear poet !
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Date: 5/24/2022 7:36:00 PM
You leave us with a last swan song that brilliantly expresses what a poetic talent you were dear Geoffrey. I am so thankful I can continue to visit your pages. My favorites of your poems were “Omens and Sonnet Pathetique“. And now this treasure. You will be greatly missed. Blessings and Aloha, Connie xxoo
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Date: 5/20/2022 4:08:00 PM
A month has passed since I last visited you, Geoffrey, and now I know why you have not been here recently. You have gone to your rest. God bless you. I never knew you too well, but I appreciate the intelligence you showed in your writing.
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Date: 5/13/2022 9:41:00 AM
"The cyclic shape of life yet comes about With each repeat we greet all creatures live"-- beautiful poetry, Geoffrey; masterfully composed! Enjoyed very much.
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Date: 5/9/2022 12:34:00 AM
Your villanelle is superb Geoffrey. I've yet to attempt this form but yours reads beautifully. ..and what a great title! Great work. Cheers - Gary
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Date: 4/16/2022 10:07:00 AM
Geoffrey, the alternating lines that come together at the end go very nicely together to express your beautiful meaning here. Good luck in the villanelle contest.
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Geoffrey Brewer
Date: 4/17/2022 5:21:00 PM
Many thanks, Andrea. I have actually submitted a different villanelle in the current contest. This one was just based on an idea.
Date: 4/15/2022 7:32:00 PM
I like this a lot, Geoffrey. I'm a big fan of the villanelle and write lots of them myself. This is the first work of yours I have read, and I am impressed.
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Geoffrey Brewer
Date: 4/17/2022 5:18:00 PM
I am very glad you like it, Milton. Thanks for your kind response.

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