Free Will - Boon Or Bane

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Free will chooses limitation Otherwise we would not be here Enmeshed in fearful contraction Stopping love divine to draw near Ego computes; our heart is free Free will chooses limitation Anchored in negativity Thus spewing toxic reactions Souls need simple - heart expansion Suffused with bliss in the current Free will chooses limitation Caught in desires impermanent Ceasing to size, we vaporise Renewing throb of bliss elation Strange it is, we self-block surprise Free will chooses limitation 28-May-2021

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Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 5/28/2021 5:37:00 AM

I agree, and it is interesting how we self sabotage when all we crave is success, lol, I understand this well, Thank you for your witty heart and sharp mind today, much love xo

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 5/28/2021 6:34:00 AM

Joanna Daniel

Date: 5/28/2021 5:04:00 AM

Deep thinking, Seeker:)

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 5/28/2021 4:01:00 AM

There is much depth in your argument. Free will is important as it determines if we're going right or left