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         thoughts conveyed

     artfully

  words and space

       and lines

             playing together

                  unchained

          from meter

     or rhyme

          or rules

              flowing like a river

          on a page

 


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Judy Ball Date: 12/21/2021 3:06:00 PM True poetry. Nicely expressed. God Bless and Merry Christmas and Happy New Year to you and yours. JB Login to Reply P.S. Awtry Date: 12/21/2021 4:50:00 PM thank you Judy. Merry Christmas and Happy New Year to you, as well. :) ~ps

Jennifer Proxenos Date: 12/20/2021 5:41:00 AM My style of poetry completely - playing by the rules is needed at times, it forever teaches us, but, letting your words flow is relaxing and creative, as is this write of yours, really lovely! May your Christmas be a blessed one and may you and your family have a wonderful, happy day P.S Hugs, Jennifer. Login to Reply P.S. Awtry Date: 12/20/2021 5:43:00 AM Thank you so much! :)-ps

Valsa George Date: 12/17/2021 9:02:00 PM Fine definition, wisely put...dear PS Login to Reply P.S. Awtry Date: 12/17/2021 9:54:00 PM thank you Valsa :)

Caren Krutsinger Date: 12/13/2021 12:34:00 PM "flowing like a river on a page" - lovely metaphor. Login to Reply P.S. Awtry Date: 12/13/2021 12:42:00 PM thank you dear poet :) ~ps

Judy Ball Date: 12/9/2021 3:20:00 PM Beautifully said. Loved this. God Bless, JB Login to Reply P.S. Awtry Date: 12/9/2021 4:11:00 PM Thank you Judy :) -ps

Gershon Wolf Date: 12/7/2021 7:35:00 PM Love, love, love the way you've spaced everything to reflect so brilliantly your poem's message. Really cool, as we used to say! Bravo, Gershon Login to Reply P.S. Awtry Date: 12/7/2021 7:41:00 PM Thank you Gershon! Glad that you liked this one :) ~ps

Panagiota Romios Date: 12/7/2021 6:32:00 PM There is nothing wrong with rhyme nor meter. Think of music..there would be none, without it. I realize how much both are despised here. Use what works for you PS. Some of the best writers here use rhyme and meter. I am a dummy when it comes to meter. Holy smokes. Densoid, PhD, I love your simplicity and kindness PS. It shines in your poetry. A blessing to us all. Your good heart has its ownrhythm.))) Pangie xx PS Fan Club. Login to Reply P.S. Awtry Date: 12/7/2021 6:41:00 PM You are right, nothing wrong with rhyme nor meter. All forms have their charms :D Thank you for your very kind comments. ~ps