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thoughts conveyed artfully words and space and lines playing together unchained from meter or rhyme or rules flowing like a river on a page 2019

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Date: 12/21/2021 3:06:00 PM
True poetry. Nicely expressed. God Bless and Merry Christmas and Happy New Year to you and yours. JB
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Date: 12/21/2021 4:50:00 PM
thank you Judy. Merry Christmas and Happy New Year to you, as well. :) ~ps
Date: 12/20/2021 5:41:00 AM
My style of poetry completely - playing by the rules is needed at times, it forever teaches us, but, letting your words flow is relaxing and creative, as is this write of yours, really lovely! May your Christmas be a blessed one and may you and your family have a wonderful, happy day P.S Hugs, Jennifer.
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Date: 12/20/2021 5:43:00 AM
Thank you so much! :)-ps
Date: 12/17/2021 9:02:00 PM
Fine definition, wisely put...dear PS
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Date: 12/17/2021 9:54:00 PM
thank you Valsa :)
Date: 12/13/2021 12:34:00 PM
"flowing like a river on a page" - lovely metaphor.
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Date: 12/13/2021 12:42:00 PM
thank you dear poet :) ~ps
Date: 12/9/2021 3:20:00 PM
Beautifully said. Loved this. God Bless, JB
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Date: 12/9/2021 4:11:00 PM
Thank you Judy :) -ps
Date: 12/7/2021 7:35:00 PM
Love, love, love the way you've spaced everything to reflect so brilliantly your poem's message. Really cool, as we used to say! Bravo, Gershon
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Date: 12/7/2021 7:41:00 PM
Thank you Gershon! Glad that you liked this one :) ~ps
Date: 12/7/2021 6:32:00 PM
There is nothing wrong with rhyme nor meter. Think of music..there would be none, without it. I realize how much both are despised here. Use what works for you PS. Some of the best writers here use rhyme and meter. I am a dummy when it comes to meter. Holy smokes. Densoid, PhD, I love your simplicity and kindness PS. It shines in your poetry. A blessing to us all. Your good heart has its ownrhythm.))) Pangie xx PS Fan Club.
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Date: 12/7/2021 6:41:00 PM
You are right, nothing wrong with rhyme nor meter. All forms have their charms :D Thank you for your very kind comments. ~ps