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Free the Bind (Englyn)

As I open up my mind, please step inside
So much I hope to find
Help me see beyond the grind
So my mind no longer binds

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Michael Torres

Date: 10/29/2008 12:02:00 PM

Michael this is becoming habit another win. Very proud of you my brother and so is your heavenly father. Blessings Michael Torres

Ernesto P. Santiago

Date: 10/2/2008 6:05:00 AM

congratulations, my friend, on your well thought piece win in BS four down lines contest, bravo! rgds, Otsenre

Constance La France

Date: 10/2/2008 2:16:00 AM

Michael..congratulations on your win. Lots to think about in a few lines.... Constance

Teresita Cailo

Date: 10/1/2008 4:47:00 PM

My warmest congratulations to you, a very nice read and well deserving :)

Sharon Winter

Date: 10/1/2008 2:35:00 PM

Official and warmest congrats Michael on your Second Place win!!! Well deserved and a big YAY!!! Love, Shar xoxo

Date: 10/1/2008 1:21:00 PM

Michael, congratulations on your second place finish in Brian's contest! I just wanted to drop by and add this to my other comment. Keep up the good writing! Karen

Michaela Payne

Date: 9/3/2008 7:45:00 AM

wow this was deep Michael I love the way you think and write, it's so... profound and meaningful, makes me think - awesome write - blessings, Michaela

Deneen White

Date: 9/2/2008 7:23:00 PM

nice tribute to Brian,hope he likes it, take care D-nyce

Marycile Beer

Date: 9/2/2008 7:17:00 PM

Know the feeling my special son. I feel the same way if I get away from the rhyme poetry. Love U, God Bless, Cile

Ali Matheny

Date: 9/2/2008 1:29:00 PM

Hey read my BRAND NEW POEMS!!!!!!!! please????????!!!!!!!!

Date: 9/2/2008 1:19:00 PM

Much said in jsut four lines. The rhyme is quite effective in forwarding your thoughts. Nice dedication--Brian is such a prolific poet and so willing to help others in their writing journeys. I've read this poem a few times and still find more to ponder. Nice job! Thank you for your kind words regarding my poem. Blessings to you. Karen

P Sheart

Date: 9/2/2008 8:15:00 AM

Hi Michael Excellent write! I love the way you think. This tells me that in order for our percpective to grow we need another's opinion to take us to a place we can't always get to on our own. Loved it for it is so true! Thanks for your comments on my latest lyrics. I was worried folks might think it crossed the line a bit. Your comments made me smile! To cute dear Michael. Have a wonderful day, many blessings to you and yours hun. Take care. Love Light Truth Patricia

Brian Strand

Date: 9/1/2008 12:14:00 AM

Thank you Michael.A nice insight into the poet's heart.I know couplets are a favourite form so I hope we also see some englyns in your future postings.Might make this form a subject of one of my contests to encourage its usage here on PS.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome observations

James Foulk

Date: 8/31/2008 7:40:00 PM

all I can say Michael, another beautiful poem that only you can write. I enjoyed this poem very much. Thank you for reading my Garden Veg. on table and for your comment and on the other stuff, you poem that you wrote about me i can't tell you in enough words what it means to me, no one as ever done something like that before, and i truly do thank you.

Dorian Petersen Potter

Date: 8/31/2008 5:34:00 PM

Let me tell you how much I really enjoy your poetry very much,M.J. Been reading it for a long time here at our poetrysoup.com :)Very nice Englyn you've penned here, my friend...Have a great day! Sincerely, Dorian

Ali Matheny

Date: 8/31/2008 5:12:00 PM

Hey, Read My New Poems, PLEASE!!!!!!!???????

Mohammad Yamin

Date: 8/31/2008 5:08:00 PM

Dear Michael, You have posted a brilliant poem with a new light of vision. Short but crisp and enormously beautiful. You have a wide canvas of thoughts. I am highly impressed. -Mohammad

Sharon Winter

Date: 8/31/2008 4:12:00 PM

Really excellent Michael. I am always nervous to try new forms. You did a super job! Love, Shar

Sheila Kathryn Barrera

Date: 8/31/2008 6:49:00 AM

Interesting concept there, I usually think of opening up my mind to reach out, not so much as to let someone else in. And yes, we all need to see beyond the grind. BLessed is the friend who helps us to do so. Nice short poem, I enjoyed. SKB

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