Free Persimmons

I woke to billowing curtains
lunging in the breeze,
and the scent of jasmine
thick against the glass.

This once-orderly garden, gone sparse:
unkempt grass and the bougainvillea—
and that persimmon tree we loathe,
heaving with an over-abundance
of ripening fruit.

The early sun casts a hazy pillar
to weight the bedroom floor.

Don’t wake me.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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November 1, 2008 at 7:06 PM
All three to the finals - wow - Judging by your poetry it's very understandable - Great writing, congratulations and God Bless
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