Karen Jones Poet Rhyme

Free

I’m a free spirited woman you silver see
So it is a goal to write free poetry
Love the style when done well it’s unique
Makes me smile inspires indigo peace
Like a wild flower in the blue breeze
This windy style from me seems to flee
Why can’t I catch the bug for free writing
Is it like falling in love while red bird sings
I’m emerald envious of poets who esteem 
Writing in free style like spreading wing
While my mind unwinds a while rhyming
Like a brain on training wheels cherry cycling
Free style writer’s tell me one teal thing
How to make fire with white word bring 
My hope of free writing to life from dream
Leave me a comment jump start my trying

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Tom Cunningham August 5, 2024 at 8:48 PM Write how you want to write Karen, we all have our own individual trademark style. Tom Karen Jones August 5, 2024 at 10:44 PM Well the thing is Tom I want to grow not stay stuck in my present style but to evolve into versatility of many styles like my latest goal of limerick writing.

Victor Buhagiar August 5, 2024 at 8:31 AM Beautiful rhyme that always eludes me. Loved your poem. Hugs. Karen Jones August 5, 2024 at 10:48 AM Thanks Victor my rhyming is kind of annoying to me but I think that way in poetry. I admire poets who aren’t rhyming and still capture the audience!

thriveni c mysore August 4, 2024 at 7:11 PM you be bee! lovely free. indigo peace, blue breeze... Happy writing. Karen Jones August 4, 2024 at 7:12 PM Thanks Thriveni! I sent you soup mail!

Andrea Dietrich August 4, 2024 at 12:35 PM I can relate. My free star is usually more on the side of prose. It was cool how you emulated the colorful free versers with your words like indigo and teal! Karen Jones August 4, 2024 at 1:30 PM I enjoy reading your stimulating verses. Thanks for reading my free write!

Sam Kauffman August 4, 2024 at 9:14 AM Lovely use of color, Karen. It really enhances your whole poem. Very interesting rhyming sequence. Love the invitation for feedback in the last line and the image of the "brain on training wheels.' So clever. Sending you blessings for all of your "free writing!" Karen Jones August 4, 2024 at 10:31 AM Thanks Sam I really appreciate and need writing blessings!

Ink Empress August 4, 2024 at 8:02 AM This is beyond brilliant dear karen! The similes and also the wordplay here is beyond artistic and you have no reason to be envious as you write so well! I love the way youv rhymes here and also how youv written “ Free style writer’s tell me one teal thing How to make fire with white word bring My hope of free writing to life from dream Leave me a comment jump start my trying” awwn you have a rhythmic flow to your words woven here! Always enjoy reading your work! Sending you light Karen Jones August 4, 2024 at 8:55 AM Inky I admire your personal writing style and skill so much! I appreciate your kind comments.

Silent One August 4, 2024 at 6:08 AM Nice rhymes, although the rhyme scheme is a bit different.. Always let our writing do the talking in the way you want to... Karen Jones August 4, 2024 at 6:37 AM Thanks for the tip. I try but often I do better when I don’t try so hard like when I’m inspired. Hmmm you say the rhyme is different? Hmmmm now I’m trying to look for it what’s wrong lol