Free

I’m a free spirited woman you silver see So it is a goal to write free poetry Love the style when done well it’s unique Makes me smile inspires indigo peace Like a wild flower in the blue breeze This windy style from me seems to flee Why can’t I catch the bug for free writing Is it like falling in love while red bird sings I’m emerald envious of poets who esteem Writing in free style like spreading wing While my mind unwinds a while rhyming Like a brain on training wheels cherry cycling Free style writer’s tell me one teal thing How to make fire with white word bring My hope of free writing to life from dream Leave me a comment jump start my trying

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Tom Cunningham

Date: 8/5/2024 8:48:00 PM

Write how you want to write Karen, we all have our own individual trademark style. Tom

Karen Jones
Date: 8/5/2024 10:44:00 PM

Well the thing is Tom I want to grow not stay stuck in my present style but to evolve into versatility of many styles like my latest goal of limerick writing.

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 8/5/2024 8:31:00 AM

Beautiful rhyme that always eludes me. Loved your poem. Hugs.

Karen Jones
Date: 8/5/2024 10:48:00 AM

Thanks Victor my rhyming is kind of annoying to me but I think that way in poetry. I admire poets who aren’t rhyming and still capture the audience!

thriveni c mysore

Date: 8/4/2024 7:11:00 PM

you be bee! lovely free. indigo peace, blue breeze... Happy writing.

Karen Jones
Date: 8/4/2024 7:12:00 PM

Thanks Thriveni! I sent you soup mail!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/4/2024 12:35:00 PM

I can relate. My free star is usually more on the side of prose. It was cool how you emulated the colorful free versers with your words like indigo and teal!

Karen Jones
Date: 8/4/2024 1:30:00 PM

I enjoy reading your stimulating verses. Thanks for reading my free write!

Sam Kauffman

Date: 8/4/2024 9:14:00 AM

Lovely use of color, Karen. It really enhances your whole poem. Very interesting rhyming sequence. Love the invitation for feedback in the last line and the image of the "brain on training wheels.' So clever. Sending you blessings for all of your "free writing!"

Karen Jones
Date: 8/4/2024 10:31:00 AM

Thanks Sam I really appreciate and need writing blessings!

Ink Empress

Date: 8/4/2024 8:02:00 AM

This is beyond brilliant dear karen! The similes and also the wordplay here is beyond artistic and you have no reason to be envious as you write so well! I love the way youv rhymes here and also how youv written “ Free style writer’s tell me one teal thing How to make fire with white word bring My hope of free writing to life from dream Leave me a comment jump start my trying” awwn you have a rhythmic flow to your words woven here! Always enjoy reading your work! Sending you light

Karen Jones
Date: 8/4/2024 8:55:00 AM

Inky I admire your personal writing style and skill so much! I appreciate your kind comments.

Silent One

Date: 8/4/2024 6:08:00 AM

Nice rhymes, although the rhyme scheme is a bit different.. Always let our writing do the talking in the way you want to...

Karen Jones
Date: 8/4/2024 6:37:00 AM

Thanks for the tip. I try but often I do better when I don’t try so hard like when I’m inspired. Hmmm you say the rhyme is different? Hmmmm now I’m trying to look for it what’s wrong lol