Free

I want to live, I want to grow I want to be free, I want to be me I need to live and be loved But if you need to clip my wings I’ll fly away and never look back Because I need to be me I need to be free AP: Honorable Mention 2020 Submitted on April 28, 2018 for CONTEST NO.430 sponsored by BRIAN STRAND

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Caren Krutsinger

Date: 4/29/2018 5:25:00 AM

I am WOMAN, hear me roar! Reminds me so much of that song. YES! YES! YES Line. YES!

Line Gauthier
Date: 4/29/2018 7:06:00 AM

True, thanks for your visit, Caren.

Arturo Michael

Date: 4/28/2018 4:42:00 PM

Shout it from the mountain tops...deep down to soul...True words for all...

Line Gauthier
Date: 4/28/2018 5:36:00 PM

Thank you for your delightful visit and comment, Arturo. Much appreciated.

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 4/28/2018 2:22:00 PM

I like the way you state your case, Line. Sometimes people are left confused when a partner leaves. He has ample warning. Wishing you success in Brian's contest! Hugs, Carolyn

Line Gauthier
Date: 4/28/2018 3:16:00 PM

In this poem there is still the chance for redemption, or... it's a warning to potential suitors. LOL Thank goodness those days are forever behind me. Thanks for your lovely visit, Carolyn.