Fred

i had a friend named fred who was bright yellow and red my mom said he lived in my head until he jumped on my bed as she opened my door he fell through the floor and let out a roar then mom screamed dinosaur she cried at the site then grabbed my hand tight as she ran around in fright saying "my son you were right" much to my dismay she said he couldn't stay and sent him away the very next day June 29, 2019 Dinosaur for children contest Sponsor Line Gauthier

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Jeanne Mcgee

Date: 7/6/2019 2:15:00 PM

This is sooo cute Sandra. Congratulations on your win!

Sandra Adams
Date: 7/7/2019 12:29:00 PM

Thank you, it was a fun little write! hugs :)

Kai Michael Neumann

Date: 7/6/2019 6:53:00 AM

Congratulations on your top podium spot. I like Fred. Can he come over to my house sometime please. Kind wishes, Kai

Sandra Adams
Date: 7/6/2019 12:20:00 PM

lol you can surely borrow Fred anytime you like! Thank you for the kind comment :) hugs

Rob Carmack

Date: 7/6/2019 6:04:00 AM

I like the scope of this, short and sweet. Congrats Sandra.

Sandra Adams
Date: 7/6/2019 12:21:00 PM

Thank you Rob...my muse struggles with rhyme, so the poem was short but it worked for me :) hugs

Jan Allison

Date: 7/6/2019 6:04:00 AM

what a cute poem Sandra, Congrats on your top spot:-) hugs Jan xx

Sandra Adams
Date: 7/6/2019 12:22:00 PM

thank you Jan...it just came to me one day, weeks after trying and throwing in the towel! hugs :)

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 7/6/2019 12:19:00 AM

This is a fun one, congrats. Hugs Rick.

Sandra Adams
Date: 7/6/2019 12:27:00 PM

Thanks Richard...it was a fun write!:) hugs

Gershon Wolf

Date: 7/3/2019 8:21:00 PM

I'm with Andrea (drop down) here, as this poem really appeals to kids (of all ages, as I like it too!) G.L. in the contest. Best wishes, Gershon

Sandra Adams
Date: 7/3/2019 8:39:00 PM

Lol thank you. My daughter in law told me to frame it and give it to my grandson for his 4th birthday which is just a few weeks away! Hugs :)

Caycay Jennings

Date: 7/2/2019 8:13:00 AM

This is cute which is kin to adorable which is perfect for reading to children, especially when you throw in the rhyme and beat you laced your adorable poem with. Best of luck in the contest and all else ... CayCay

Sandra Adams
Date: 7/2/2019 11:02:00 AM

thank you so much....my muse struggles most with rhyme! comments like this make me think perhaps i will try my hand at rhyme again sometime in the future! :) hugs

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 7/2/2019 7:46:00 AM

Funny dinosaur poem, Sandra. My mom would not let me keep my dinosaur either!

Sandra Adams
Date: 7/2/2019 10:59:00 AM

lol thanks...mom's are no fun when we are little ones and want what we want...hugs

Harry Horsman

Date: 7/1/2019 2:53:00 PM

Ah, Poor Fred,,,Love your poem, and how you brought Fred to life..

Sandra Adams
Date: 7/1/2019 6:25:00 PM

Awww thank you Harry! Not often my muse does rhymes! I appreciate your read and kind comment :) hugs

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 7/1/2019 12:03:00 PM

I love the delight seen when children read a poem they can identify with. This is that kind of lovable poem Sandra. I hope this does great in the contest! : ) xxoo

Sandra Adams
Date: 7/1/2019 6:26:00 PM

Thank you Connie, I tried to make it a simple rhyme that would appeal to younger children :) hugs

Gordon Mcconnell

Date: 7/1/2019 5:27:00 AM

Real great piece Sandra, really fun write as well as great rhyme, you see I love rhyme so I must be a kid!

Sandra Adams
Date: 7/1/2019 6:52:00 AM

Lol we all have that little bit of kid inside of us :). Thank you for the visit and kind comment! Hugs

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/30/2019 2:03:00 PM

that is TRULY a dino poem meant for a child. YOu ought to get a great placement with it, sandy!!

Sandra Adams
Date: 6/30/2019 6:17:00 PM

i guess working around kids helped me with this one! Thank you my friend~ Hugs