Freckles

Freckly freckled face Freckling facial features form Featuring freckles http://www.thehighlanderspoems.com/nature4.php

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Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 12/25/2009 7:11:00 PM

Cute freckle poem James.. one never knows is it haiku or alliteration.. either way its fun and fantastic to perk up one's spirit.. u always do... luv.. "Sweetheart"

Nicole Sharon Brown

Date: 7/19/2009 11:24:00 PM

this is quite a tongue twister... but a great description of freckles.

Charlene Bird

Date: 7/17/2009 8:16:00 PM

Creative and humorous James, your pen is swirling away tonight I see!

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 7/17/2009 5:49:00 PM

I have a few...oh damn..those are age spots. This is hilarious..BG

Date: 7/17/2009 1:02:00 PM

Got a good chuckle out of this one. What a tougue twister. Good use of alliteration. Keep up the good writing. Karen

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/17/2009 12:20:00 PM

Great Haiku with the alliteration best understood by most redheads or people with the redhead gene like me. Sara