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As we put putted out into the estuary, the sounds of the city receded, the tang of sea filled my nostrils and the water turned from brown to aqua. Danny put out the lines but all was quiet so I whittled a piece of spruce, letting the shavings drift in our wake, as I sucked a hard yellow candy waiting for my sockeye.

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Date: 9/2/2018 8:00:00 PM
Very nice visualization!
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D.W. Rodgers
Date: 9/4/2018 11:37:00 AM
Thanks Nancy, I was playing with prose poems a the time and trying to focus on the image.

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