Fragrant

fragrant wild roses induced intoxication ~ bees dizzy at work Submitted on June 18, 2019 for contest BIRDS OR BEES sponsored by TANIA KITCHIN

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/22/2019 7:00:00 PM

Oh, yes, I remember this one and how cute it is . Congrats for the win

Line Gauthier
Date: 6/22/2019 10:59:00 PM

Thanks, Andrea. Much appreciated.

Jeanne Mcgee

Date: 6/22/2019 6:14:00 AM

I so love this! Bees dissy at work. Congrats, Line.

Line Gauthier
Date: 6/22/2019 7:46:00 AM

Thanks for your lovely visit and comment, Jeanne.

Alkas Poetry

Date: 6/22/2019 4:03:00 AM

Dear Line, bees dizzy ! imagine us with all this fragrance around... Lovely words, make me remember one of my poems here,,, the one you suggested me some change... it was about bees too. Have a nice weekend ! salute alkas

Line Gauthier
Date: 6/22/2019 7:47:00 AM

Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, Alkas.

Ann Gilmour

Date: 6/22/2019 2:57:00 AM

Many congrats on your beautiful win Line. With kindest thoughts Ann xx

Line Gauthier
Date: 6/22/2019 7:47:00 AM

Thanks, Ann. Much appreciated.

Timothy Mcguire

Date: 6/22/2019 1:00:00 AM

Wonderful! Love "bees dizzy at work"

Line Gauthier
Date: 6/22/2019 7:47:00 AM

Thanks, Timothy. Much appreciated.

Laura Leiser

Date: 6/21/2019 7:59:00 PM

Fine haiku, Line! Congrats on your win! :)

Line Gauthier
Date: 6/21/2019 8:47:00 PM

Thanks, Laura. Much appreciated.

Tania Kitchin

Date: 6/21/2019 7:03:00 PM

Line, congratulations on your winning placement with this lovely haiku with beautiful imagery, enjoyed!

Line Gauthier
Date: 6/21/2019 8:47:00 PM

Thanks, Tania. Much appreciated.

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 6/21/2019 6:38:00 AM

"bees dizzy at work" - delightful! Brings the buzzing word to mind, without saying it. Highly clever, Line.

Line Gauthier
Date: 6/21/2019 7:52:00 AM

Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, Caren.

Panagiota Romios

Date: 6/20/2019 2:30:00 PM

Delightful Haiku for this time of year. My best to you in this contest Panagiota

Line Gauthier
Date: 6/20/2019 7:30:00 PM

Thank you, Panagiota. Much appreciated.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/19/2019 10:05:00 PM

cute play on busy!!!

Line Gauthier
Date: 6/20/2019 6:55:00 AM

Thanks, Andrea. Much appreciated.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 6/19/2019 7:56:00 PM

Lovely!

Line Gauthier
Date: 6/19/2019 9:13:00 PM

Thank you, Kim. Much appreciated.

Gershon Wolf

Date: 6/18/2019 9:33:00 PM

Love that twist, Line: 'Bees dizzy at work.' Nicely done. G.L. in the contest. Should do well, methinks. Best wishes, Gershon

Line Gauthier
Date: 6/18/2019 10:03:00 PM

Thanks, Gershon. Most appreciated.