fragrance of fading roses

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Written to raise awareness on an individual that struggles with finding light amidst mental health illness.

My soul 
    is in purgatory,
settling in fading tunes
  of suppressed silence,
swerving perpetually 
amongst
   smoky quartz silhouettes;
swiveling through 
the 
 dimmed dungeon 
to unraveling shadows
of yesterday’s destruction,
 moving in s l o w motion~
rejoicing invisible 
  rainbow glows
in limitless devotion,
fugitively 
  resenting the shifting
     season of faith~
I question the 
treacherous torrents,
through 
   unorchestrated symphonies…
where do the tides of jealousy
crash and hide to grieve,
over untouched waves,
  when it has washed 
away compelling
wishes
   lost in perfect storms?

For, sometimes, 
when trembling
skies bleed black pearls,
upon these aching lungs, 
I think of every 
  nameless ghost
that emanates 
familiar fragrances:
convincing 
  my naive mind,
there’s no evil 
  even in darkness. 
Although I’ve 
    seen tints of 
turning leaves conversing
with tantalizing tears,
whilst this volcanic
  heart is ransacked
and ruined,
d a n c i n g away from fears, 
  forging meaningless scribes,
in fragmented fortunes, 
left as debris along the 
forgotten fields of 
rambling roses drenched 
   in remorseful rain. 

And I stand in the
eye of cataclysmic cyclones~ 
  exhaling the exhaustion,
as the wolf moon calls me,
above million 
   mourning mountains
      in musical misery. 

Yet, when cosmic curtains
sequinned with 
   scarlet sapphires 
 of midnight skies 
drizzle drops 
  of hibiscus heaven onto the
 pages of my poetic haven, 
    I sketch stars in the shape 
        of magical w i n g s..
across cursed horizons, 
to soothe my 
   troubled thoughts:
as it’s all in my head,
the 
   demonic devils dressed
in dragonfly 
     dust to deceive me,
unaware of how 
I’ve been 
   blindfolded by
the brutal lies 
   I’ve told myself
in alienated expressions, 
that the normal
    can never neutralize.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2024



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Date: 4/23/2024 5:52:00 AM
Ink, congratulations on your win in my contest with this amazing poem, Constance
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Date: 4/8/2024 5:45:00 AM
Congratulations on this lovely piece Ink.
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Date: 2/28/2024 9:06:00 AM
Back with Congratulations on your win. I really enjoyed reading your wonderful  "Rambling" write/great ending again. Have a great/fun day writing away...............
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Date: 2/22/2024 5:55:00 PM
Another majestic, monster of a poem Ink Express. It's like a title wave of majestic, and sometimes frightening, imagery...
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Date: 2/22/2024 4:37:00 PM
A deep, emotional, and soulful poem, my dear friend. The depth you create with your vivid imagery connects at the soul level so the reader can experience the emotional pain and chaos the mind can inflict, compelling and revealing. The synapses of my brain connect to memories of these powers of deception, the agony of my guilt for thinking these wrong thoughts are excruciating at times. I imagine the suffering that evil can cause. My prayer or with you. A FAV for my list. Bill
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Date: 2/22/2024 3:30:00 PM
let's the soul speaks, fascinating images, cosmic curtains as you paint brightly, thank you poet,
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Date: 2/22/2024 2:58:00 PM
IE, as bad or jealous as the world is, if you can deal with it by writing such descriptive words that create a fantastic dialogue and reflection, then you are simply A-OK! I'm not sure whether you come out of this in one piece at the end...it seems as though that is a question. However, if you are smart enough to document this experience, then I think you end up on the good side of the paper. I certainly salute that your writing is a great response to what you deal with.
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Date: 2/22/2024 2:29:00 PM
I love the beauty and eloquence of this wonderful, introspective poem, but especially the second verse, including 'Although I've seen tints of turning leaves conversing with tantalizing tears.' Really lovely, Ink. :)
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Date: 2/22/2024 1:54:00 PM
wow, you went out of your way with the theme of rambling. Excellent as always, Ink
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Date: 2/22/2024 12:03:00 PM
I think everyone's soul is in purgatory, so we set upon a path of serenity, so our souls can release the somber state of their silence, so we can see the world in positive light... As always you portray the complexities of inner turmoil, spiritual contemplation, and the human struggle to reconcile conflicting emotions and experiences in metaphorical detail... Amidst the chaos and turmoil, there is a poignant recognition of the beauty in pain and the transformative power of poetic expression.
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Date: 2/22/2024 12:05:00 PM
Best of luck in the contest...
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Silent One
Date: 2/22/2024 12:04:00 PM
IT culminates in a realization of self-deception and the need to confront the brutal truths that lie within. The acknowledgment of being "blindfolded by the brutal lies" underscores the complexity of human experience and the constant struggle to find meaning and truth in a world filled with uncertainty and contradiction.
Date: 2/22/2024 11:28:00 AM
Dear Ink, this masterful poem is a work of art, showcasing impeccable imagery and eloquent word choice. The quote at the beginning adds depth and meaning to the piece. Your thoughts are clear and profound, a testament to your intellectual prowess. The description of sketching stars as magical wings across dark horizons is a beautiful and captivating image. Overall, a truly exquisite piece of writing. BOL with the contest.
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Date: 2/22/2024 11:21:00 AM
Dear Ink Empress, Your poem is a mesmerizing journey through the depths of the soul, navigating the complexities of emotion and introspection. The rich imagery and evocative language create a hauntingly beautiful landscape of memory, longing, and self-discovery. Your words are filled with raw emotion and thoughtful introspection, capturing the tumultuous yet transformative nature of human experience. This is such a deep personal piece the way that it delves into the heart of our inner struggles and resilience. Always a a Fan! - Blessings, Daniel
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Date: 2/22/2024 9:58:00 AM
Your work always gifts the reader. with your beautiful and honest musings. A real pleasure to read and be acquainted with your poetry- lots of love, light,- a hug, too! Just me...
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Date: 2/22/2024 8:57:00 AM
Your poetry is of such a high standard, even when writing on the dark side of life. Great alliteration and imagery. Best for a win.
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Date: 2/22/2024 8:25:00 AM
You keep amazing me with your extraordinary talent. In most of your poems, you unburden your heart. Let the pent-up feelings find an outlet. Definitely, it will have a cathartic effect! "When cosmic curtains of midnight skies drizzle drops of heaven onto the pages of my poetic haven,I sketch stars in the shape of magical wings, across cursed horizons, to soothe my troubled thoughts:" Indeed your poems have the glitter of stars and soar high in the sky on magical wings and they perch in our hearts! A highly emotive poem of deep poignancy!
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Date: 2/22/2024 8:21:00 AM
I really enjoyed reading your wonderful  "Rambling" write. What a Great ending. Guess we all have been blindfolded at sometime in our lives. "Good Luck" Have a blessed day writing away..........
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Date: 2/22/2024 6:01:00 AM
Fighting the storms within as "trembling skies bleed black pearls" Well penned empress
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Date: 2/22/2024 5:57:00 AM
I like your quote at the top of your poem. Your thoughts are always cogent my friend--a message from the intellect hard to describe as rambling.--I sketch stars in the shape of magical wings, across cursed horizons, to soothe my troubled thoughts----just a glimpse of the lovely write!
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Date: 2/22/2024 4:02:00 AM
swerving perpetually amongst smoky quartz silhouettes… oooo swiveling through the dimmed dungeon to unraveling shadows of yesterday’s destruction,love the dark spooky vibes!!! trembling skies bleed black pearls, upon these aching lungs,mmmm that imagery !!! cosmic curtains of midnight skies drizzle drops of heaven onto the pages of my poetic haven.. damn child.. that flow, alliterations.. that pot of ink u dip that quill in to is glorious papi!!!
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Date: 2/22/2024 1:28:00 AM
So dark … it’s amazing how you can write different moods
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