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Fragments of My Heart

I have bared it time and again with the innocence of a child, and showed you all my grief and pain a bleeding heart that smiles, now show me once your concealed heart to find what lies there fragments of this numb heart,do you still share. *For Brian's Sixes and Sevens (failed)

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 1/6/2012 10:24:00 PM
OH, sorry. it looks like this one failed? I think it is very nice, Kash. I just never know what to expect with Brian! One little thing I think would make this one better. Take out the word "do" in the last line since it is not really necessary. (unless you were asking a question?) The message of this one is profound, kash. Sorry I missed it before.
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Date: 12/19/2011 11:43:00 AM
Hello Kash, Beautiful, tender and sincere piece you have written here. As Always, Shar
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Date: 12/18/2011 10:36:00 AM
Enjoyed this Kash.x
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Date: 12/18/2011 10:31:00 AM
Wonderful write enjoyed. Thanks for sharing. bl
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Date: 12/18/2011 9:59:00 AM
very touching and deep ........ I can relate entirely....a very nice piece of writing
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Date: 12/18/2011 9:55:00 AM
awhooo... my head is swimmimg.. just greeat, kashi buddy... come visit! :)
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Date: 12/18/2011 9:36:00 AM
Good write my friend... always grat to read your work and soul... Michael
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Date: 12/18/2011 9:14:00 AM
NOT my heart;)
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