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Fragments of Consciousness

There is nothing we can think that is not the thought of a universe-- no spark we can light that a star has not first seen (the dust of us and what we build upon); so small we are—not our atoms, for each of these is a world of its own while we price away our freedom chipping perfect gems into fragments of consciousness the lesser man calls love and possessions….

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Date: 4/20/2019 11:50:00 PM
This is great! The fragments of our lives depend on our priorities, and experiences. In every part we are learning, growing, and working on being the best version of us leading us to understanding the lesser the human calls upon possessions the more liberated he/she feels.
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Joe Dimino
Date: 4/21/2019 10:30:00 PM
Thank you so much. Beautiful comment! God and you are a majority. We need nothing else.
Date: 3/10/2019 8:51:00 AM
You are right my wise friend.. Great last stanza..
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Joe Dimino
Date: 3/10/2019 12:58:00 PM
Thank you so much, Si; have a great day!
Date: 3/10/2019 12:55:00 AM
An expression, perhaps, of our universal insignificance and our personal significance; and our priorities in existing within the whole lot. Great write, Joe.
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Joe Dimino
Date: 3/10/2019 12:59:00 PM
Very perceptive and wise, Lawrence; thank you my friend!

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