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Fragmented Collections of Life

Fragments and crumbs of life, all the little pieces crushed in the bottom of my memories Why is it that whenever I try to remember all of the important little bits and pieces flutter away from me and I forget... The fragments all seem to fly off into the sunset And the whole memories the strong ones, the stable ones stay with me and I watch the butterflies of my life flit off the crumbs, the details broken thoughts all collect in the bottom of my brain but when I dig them out and let them free I no longer can tell what they are or what they used to be ~Marie Viloria~ Written on: Wed. June 22, 2011 6th place in the contest: All The Little Pieces

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Date: 6/27/2011 11:38:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Constance's "All The Little Pieces" contest Marie. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/26/2011 12:34:00 AM
Many congrats on your SUPER WIN, Marie. Lainie
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Date: 6/25/2011 3:55:00 AM
Well done, and congratulations. An imaginative write.
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Date: 6/24/2011 8:44:00 PM
wow, I like how you compared them to the "stonger memories" Intersting how you see these fragmented ones as flitting butterflies. What great metaphor. Congrats on this gem!
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Date: 6/24/2011 6:13:00 PM
My congratulations on the win in the contest of constance, Marie
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Date: 6/24/2011 3:57:00 PM
Congrats on your win on this fine piece of Poetry.....Michael
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Date: 6/24/2011 3:33:00 PM
Congrats Marie on another fantastic win in this contest .. enjoy sweet success once again for poetic art luv..
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