Fragmented Collections of Life

Fragments and crumbs of life,
all the little pieces
crushed in the bottom
of my memories

Why is it
that whenever I try
to remember

all of the important
little bits and pieces
flutter away from me
and I forget...

The fragments
all seem to
fly off into the sunset

And the whole memories
the strong ones, the stable ones
stay with me

and I watch the
butterflies of my life
flit off

the crumbs, the details
broken thoughts
all collect in the bottom of my brain

but when I dig them out
and let them free
I no longer
can tell what they are
or what they used to be

~Marie Viloria~
Written on: Wed. June 22, 2011
6th place in the contest: All The Little Pieces
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Brown Avatar
June 27, 2011 at 11:38 AM
Congratulations on your win in Constance's "All The Little Pieces" contest Marie. Love, Carol
George   Avatar
June 26, 2011 at 12:34 AM
Many congrats on your SUPER WIN, Marie. Lainie
Zzzzz Avatar
June 25, 2011 at 3:55 AM
Well done, and congratulations. An imaginative write.
Dietrich Avatar
June 24, 2011 at 8:44 PM
wow, I like how you compared them to the "stonger memories" Intersting how you see these fragmented ones as flitting butterflies. What great metaphor. Congrats on this gem!
Mehta Avatar
June 24, 2011 at 6:13 PM
My congratulations on the win in the contest of constance, Marie
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June 24, 2011 at 3:57 PM
Congrats on your win on this fine piece of Poetry.....Michael
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June 24, 2011 at 3:33 PM
Congrats Marie on another fantastic win in this contest .. enjoy sweet success once again for poetic art luv..
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