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Fragile Habitats

That first picnic atop Mount Wells with the silver survival blanket and flask steaming with tea and wild flowers bursting yellow, cerise and indigo deep in sedge grass, you said “it takes seven years for Camas to grow back if trampled,” and cautiously skirted the ruptures of colour while I wondered how many years to recover if we tread too carelessly ~~~~~~~~ For Carol Brown's 'Picnic Time' contest

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Date: 8/16/2011 11:15:00 PM
Congratulations on your HM. It was tops in my book.
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Date: 5/21/2011 1:19:00 AM
wow, you are a talented writer, Soulfire. Congrats on the HM though this could just as easily have scored in the top ten!
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Date: 5/19/2011 10:16:00 AM
Soulfire, Congratulations on your success in Carol's Picnic Contest! I remember the environmental message in this poem well. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 5/18/2011 6:18:00 PM
Soulfire, Congratulations on your poem's honored success. Agape, Moses
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Date: 5/18/2011 8:14:00 AM
oh, like this one, soulfire... very interesting! big cheers for the fine win! :) huggs
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Date: 5/18/2011 8:00:00 AM
Congrats on your HM, Soulfire. Nice going. Ralph
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Date: 5/18/2011 7:17:00 AM
My Congratulations on this HM win in the contest of carol, Soulfire
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Date: 5/18/2011 5:26:00 AM
Congrats Soulfire on your HM in the picnic contest with this stunning entry and delightful write my friend.. so glad u entered it.. enjoy your special honor with luv..
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Date: 5/18/2011 5:05:00 AM
Congratulations on your winning poem placing in my contest Soulfire. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/18/2011 10:46:00 PM
Thanks for the HM Carol - fun contest. ~Soulfire~
Date: 5/14/2011 8:54:00 AM
Wonderful write. Yes, I agree with Carolyn they will grow back in time but will a relationship. Have a nice weekend. God Bless Phyl
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Date: 5/13/2011 2:50:00 PM
Oooh, I love the metaphor, Soulfire. At least a Camas will grow back eventually. Not always true with relationships. Well said! Carolyn
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Date: 5/13/2011 2:49:00 PM
Short and sweet but very deep and meaningful write, soulfire
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Date: 5/13/2011 5:32:00 AM
Amazing energy in this piece Soulfire and good luck in the contest luv.. breathtaking imagery presented in your lovely lines.. happy weekend..
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Date: 5/13/2011 3:41:00 AM
Very insightful and wise, Jen. Love, Elaine
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Date: 5/12/2011 10:08:00 PM
nice to see you around, soul... wonderful painting of reflective mind scenery... winning wishes! :) huggs, nette
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Soulfire
Date: 5/12/2011 10:20:00 PM
thanks Nette.

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