Fragile Habitats

That first picnic atop Mount Wells
with the silver survival 
blanket and flask 
steaming with tea and wild flowers bursting
yellow, cerise and indigo deep 
in sedge grass, you said 
“it takes seven years for Camas to grow 
back if  trampled,” and 
cautiously skirted the ruptures of colour
while I wondered how many
years to recover
if we tread too carelessly

 
     ~~~~~~~~


For Carol Brown's 'Picnic Time' contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Marcum Wong Avatar
August 16, 2011 at 11:15 PM
Congratulations on your HM. It was tops in my book.
Dietrich Avatar
May 21, 2011 at 1:19 AM
wow, you are a talented writer, Soulfire. Congrats on the HM though this could just as easily have scored in the top ten!
Devonshire Avatar
May 19, 2011 at 10:16 AM
Soulfire, Congratulations on your success in Carol's Picnic Contest! I remember the environmental message in this poem well. Love, Carolyn
Freeman Avatar
May 18, 2011 at 6:18 PM
Soulfire, Congratulations on your poem's honored success. Agape, Moses
Onclaud Avatar
May 18, 2011 at 8:14 AM
oh, like this one, soulfire... very interesting! big cheers for the fine win! :) huggs
Taylor Avatar
May 18, 2011 at 8:00 AM
Congrats on your HM, Soulfire. Nice going. Ralph
Mehta Avatar
May 18, 2011 at 7:17 AM
My Congratulations on this HM win in the contest of carol, Soulfire
Sweetheart Avatar
May 18, 2011 at 5:26 AM
Congrats Soulfire on your HM in the picnic contest with this stunning entry and delightful write my friend.. so glad u entered it.. enjoy your special honor with luv..
Brown Avatar
May 18, 2011 at 5:05 AM
Congratulations on your winning poem placing in my contest Soulfire. Love, Carol
Soulfire Avatar
May 18, 2011 at 10:46 PM
Thanks for the HM Carol - fun contest. ~Soulfire~
Babcock Avatar
May 14, 2011 at 8:54 AM
Wonderful write. Yes, I agree with Carolyn they will grow back in time but will a relationship. Have a nice weekend. God Bless Phyl
Devonshire Avatar
May 13, 2011 at 2:50 PM
Oooh, I love the metaphor, Soulfire. At least a Camas will grow back eventually. Not always true with relationships. Well said! Carolyn
Mehta Avatar
May 13, 2011 at 2:49 PM
Short and sweet but very deep and meaningful write, soulfire
Sweetheart Avatar
May 13, 2011 at 5:32 AM
Amazing energy in this piece Soulfire and good luck in the contest luv.. breathtaking imagery presented in your lovely lines.. happy weekend..
George   Avatar
May 13, 2011 at 3:41 AM
Very insightful and wise, Jen. Love, Elaine
Onclaud Avatar
May 12, 2011 at 10:08 PM
nice to see you around, soul... wonderful painting of reflective mind scenery... winning wishes! :) huggs, nette
Soulfire Avatar
May 12, 2011 at 10:20 PM
thanks Nette.
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