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Fragile Eggs

Earth is fertile, eggs hatch, tender babes cry; Spring of rebirth from soil to sky. Lonely mothers reminded of tearful goodbyes. Baby birds fly from empty nests to see, body, soul, and spirit, life's trinity. Through passage from life to death, we each share breath of time, a fragile life, born of eggs. Beginnings - youth nurtured by mother, fair and father sky. Rising, our shells are dregs. Held in prayer, the Father hears mothers' begs. June 10, 2012 For Eggs Contest by Black Eyed Susan

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Date: 6/20/2012 11:51:00 AM
((()))Congrats on your winniing work..Sara
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Date: 6/19/2012 1:43:00 AM
Rhonda congrats on your great win...David
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Date: 6/18/2012 1:55:00 PM
Congratulations on a very well worded poem. Love the images.
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Date: 6/18/2012 1:50:00 PM
Our bodies are temples ;) Congrad's on your big win. Light & Love
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Date: 6/18/2012 11:21:00 AM
Thanks for your egg poem - YOU won a prize. - oxox love Anne-Lise
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Date: 6/18/2012 11:13:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Susan's "Eggs" contest Rhonda. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/15/2012 9:49:00 PM
Excellent--unique entry! Best of luck! Gwendolen
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Date: 6/11/2012 10:11:00 AM
Rhonda, love this one for the contest, good luck,,David....soup mail..
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Date: 6/10/2012 8:30:00 PM
You penned one with deep meaning, so it is different than most I am reading. sure to please Susan. I enjoyed this one.
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Date: 6/10/2012 8:29:00 PM
A nicely written tender poem for the contest. You should do very well.
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