Four Sisters

And there were four sisters
                      one of the sewed
one was bow legged
                 and one pigeon toed

One of them sang
              like a Lark in the night
they loved one another
               and never would fight

The bow legged sister
                 was bald in the back
so the sister who sewed
           sewed a hat from a sack
 
When the sister who sang
           heard a noise at the door
A burglar!, a thief!
           her voice shook the floor
 
They rose from their sleep
             as the man crept inside
the pigeon toed girl
       kicked that man in his pride

They all worked together
                     like pieces that fit
in the puzzle of life
                 with courage and wit

None of them married
                    too busy to choose
a singer, a seamstress
                   a designer of shoes

And what of the 
        bow legged sister, you say?
well, she races horses
               and she makes it pay!

No matter our talents
               how big or how small
no matter our difference
                     a place for us all!

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Date: 12/5/2023 5:03:00 AM
There are such families. Our good friend remarried and they would go to the Ukraine and rescue orphans. They adopted their first daughter, went back for her best friend and her sister. She hadn’t seen her sister in years for she was in another orphanage and she can’t walk. Now they are all living as family. They were supposed to adopt a special needs blind girl but the Ukraine war destroyed that.
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Date: 12/3/2023 4:17:00 PM
Hello Mike Gentile, a beautiful poem about the sisters. i enjoyed this poem. xxxx. Happy Sunday.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 12/4/2023 3:46:00 PM
Hello Mike, yes i have been well. getting ready for Christmas. The Christmas tree is decorated. How are how are you doing? Happy Monday. xxxxxxx /Darlene/
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Mike Gentile
Date: 12/4/2023 12:35:00 PM
Thank you so much Darlene, I hope you have been well xxoo
Date: 11/24/2023 4:30:00 PM
This is great, Mike. Thanks for the laughs..hope you had a nice Thanksgiving! Happy week-end!
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Mike Gentile
Date: 11/24/2023 5:13:00 PM
Hope you did too Charlie! Thanks so much!
Date: 11/21/2023 3:20:00 PM
This is great.. really flows and rhymes.. not sure what inspired this one, but you wrote it very well..
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Mike Gentile
Date: 11/21/2023 6:35:00 PM
Thank you so much Silent One! I’m not sure where it came from, usually I wake with a line or a title, funny how my muse works!!!
Date: 11/20/2023 2:38:00 AM
A fun poem with a lesson. Nothing takes place because there will always be a reason. Blessings.
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Mike Gentile
Date: 11/20/2023 4:08:00 AM
Thank you Victor!!
Date: 11/18/2023 7:45:00 AM
A place for us all. How clever and fun is this, the detailed descriptions of these three sisters and the creative wordplay and flow of your lines give a very mellifluous cadence to the poem: I especially love the ending! Brilliant!
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Mike Gentile
Date: 11/18/2023 10:25:00 AM
Thank you so much Ink Empress xxoo
Date: 11/18/2023 6:43:00 AM
Love this! Great humor and message at the end too! That kick in the pride hurts, sometimes needed but so painful!
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Mike Gentile
Date: 11/18/2023 10:24:00 AM
Thank you so much Kim, Happy Saturday xxpp
Date: 11/18/2023 5:19:00 AM
You are a wonderful story teller my friend. A splendid write and a profound message in the ending.
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Mike Gentile
Date: 11/18/2023 5:27:00 AM
Thank you Vijay, Happy Saturday !
Date: 11/18/2023 12:24:00 AM
A very cute story with a great message, Mike. A pleasure to read you this morning. Happy Thanksgiving my friend.
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Mike Gentile
Date: 11/18/2023 5:17:00 AM
Thank you Daniel, Happy Thanksgiving!!!
Date: 11/17/2023 9:46:00 PM
A well written poem, Mike. It was a fun read and flowed smoothly. It also had a giant message. A FAV for my list, my friend. Bill
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Mike Gentile
Date: 11/18/2023 5:17:00 AM
Thank you so much Bill!!
Date: 11/17/2023 1:04:00 PM
This feels like a children's nursery rhyme. Great characters on display Mike. If I had to marry one, while the songstress might be tempting, the sewer feels more of a practical selection. Then again, the bow legger might make big bucks as a jockey and the pigeon toed one could protect me from baddies, so idk
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Mike Gentile
Date: 11/18/2023 5:18:00 AM
It is a difficult decision Tom!! Thank you so much !
Date: 11/17/2023 12:48:00 PM
Just wonderful….humorous with a powerful message Mike! Love it! Debx
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Mike Gentile
Date: 11/18/2023 5:18:00 AM
Thank you Deb xxoo
Date: 11/17/2023 12:37:00 PM
Four talented sisters, sometimes perfection doesn't matter, teamwork does after all! There is a wonderful message here, Mike. I would like to congratulate you on being selected in the Anthology, so exciting. Bear hugs-Anaya
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Mike Gentile
Date: 11/18/2023 5:19:00 AM
Thank you so much Anaya xxoo
Date: 11/17/2023 12:07:00 PM
A creative write. It was fun to read. You gave me a smile/laugh. Thanks, I needed that. Happy Friday... Have a blessed day/weekend writing away............
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Mike Gentile
Date: 11/18/2023 5:19:00 AM
Thank you Paula, Happy Saturday xxoo
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